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Unknowing Hearts

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Unknowing Hearts

 Wrapped in the passion of the moment
 engulfed in a cascade of a emotion 
 carried by a gushing torrent of desire
 dancing on the rapids of uncertainty
 two unknowing hearts intertwined 
 in the rapture of blinding passion
 rush toward forbidden waters.

 In the midst of love's blissful chaos
 will two unknowing hearts whirl 
 perilously over confusion's cliff 
 and plunge helplessly toward   
 the jagged rocks of ill-fated love,
 or will two unknowing hearts 
 be found desperately clinging
 to the last branch of innocents? 
      

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  1. Date: 10/19/2013 11:40:00 PM
    Hello Kim, reading this deeply passionate poem....... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 6:19:00 PM
    two unknowing hearts intertwined in the rapture of blinding passion rush toward forbidden waters. a simply lovely poem full of feelings ty for sharing

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 5/19/2013 6:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Kim
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 10:35:00 PM
    Congratulations on this awesone write. Love how we are left to ponder what happens to these two hearts. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 6:13:00 PM
    Congrad's on your writing winning. Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 12:41:00 PM
    Congrats on your win.

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 5/10/2013 4:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You!
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 7:01:00 AM
    Congratulations on a well-deserved win with this write, Kim. :-)

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 5/10/2013 4:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You Delysia!
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 3:50:00 AM
    Congrats on your win. Rick

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 5/10/2013 4:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You Rick!
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 12:25:00 AM
    Congratulations on your #1 win. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 5/10/2013 4:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You!
  1. Date: 5/9/2013 10:59:00 PM
    Kim, thank you for impressing me with your awesome poem. Congrats ~SKAT~

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 5/10/2013 4:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am glad I impressed you SKAT and I thank you again for all the kind wonderful compliments you have written on many of my poems. I am working on another one right now, so I hope to impress you again.
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 6:27:00 AM
    Good morning Kim, i like the feeling of not knowing what one is walking into when it comes to love. The energy one uses through this so called blissful chaos. the cliff the plunger the fall. an excellent poem to read this beautiful Sunday Morning... always~ Linda

    Morrison Avatar Kim Morrison
    Date: 5/5/2013 2:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Once again I thank you for the very lovely comment Linda. I have read some of your work as well and it is just stunning. However, I only had time to commebt on a few.