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My Love,
You look very tired
Your eyes are bulged and sore
Why, couldn't you find the comb?
Your hair needs a groom
Hasn't your sister ironed your clothes?
Who cook your meals?
Has mama come home?
My love,
Enough is enough
Stop all my therapies no more chemo’s
Please,
Please take me home.
Yes I know I only have few days more
Let’s sing our favorites tonight
If can, we sway in the dim candle light
Lie side by side and watch the moon smiles 
You need a rest
My Love 

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  1. Date: 5/3/2013 9:20:00 PM
    Nice but sad poem...it foreshadows death.

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 5/4/2013 1:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Christine. sorry for the delay to acknoledge.
  1. Date: 5/2/2013 9:43:00 PM
    I like your pleading poem, Manel. you gave her resting mind a little comfort through your love... heartfelt~ LINDA

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 5/2/2013 10:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda. I read your poem on "Grand pa" several time. It is a masterpiece. A poet in this caliber commenting on my poems really makes me grow. Thank you Love and Hugs manel