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DAMP FIELD OF MEMORIALS

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DAMP FIELD OF MEMORIALS



not with my arms but with a heart that blesses your reveries, may peace dwell within your chest... is it possible to love you less? perhaps allow the sun to brush your hair in the afterglow of dawn? even autumn envies you as white light moves with your scent and possesses your thoughts never to be mine again in times of new moon or falling rain… and from stars above, may your feet remember our blades of grass while i half-close the damp field of memorials creaking on the burial of a resting place that finds me kneeling, asking how time can drown days much too soon... as i stumble upon this cruel, bruised night. . ......... .. Written for Constance's Contest and now, SKAT's The Saddest Landscape

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  1. Date: 4/10/2014 2:47:00 PM
    Congrats on (y)our win ,nette!!! ^_^

  1. Date: 4/9/2014 9:58:00 PM
    NETTE,, CONGRATULATIONS....SKAT

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 10:48:00 AM
    Congrats on your win! Nicely done!

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 1:35:00 AM
    Lovely Nette. Many congrats dear.

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 11:00:00 PM
    wonderful entry Nette, congrats on your win in the contest

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 5:57:00 PM
    Wow! Again....congratulations.. you always leave me in awe...

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 2:43:00 PM
    Congratulations nette on your always one of a kind poetry win. It is amazing. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 1:26:00 PM
    Wonderfully written. Congrats. Rick

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 12:47:00 PM
    Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 8:58:00 AM
    Even in grief, your poetry sings a beautiful song, Nette. This is no exception......just beautiful !

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 10:02:00 AM
    A very excellent sad pen... I hope to see it in the list.... Thank you for your kind comment on my poem~A.O

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 5:49:00 PM
    A nature inspired emotional write my friend! A sad fearful poem, a teary eyed entrance crafted into someones heart, or without it! I just loved this creative piece, made me want to write something intelligently wondrous! What a masterful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 4:12:00 PM
    AWOSOME,,,, haven't been by your page in ages it seems ;} fav's

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 3:25:00 PM
    Reads like winning material..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 12:27:00 PM
    A tear falls after the read, beautiful Nette, your poetry scents my page, peace xxx

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 11:53:00 AM
    Hey, I'll just read one poem today .... and it is your Nette - (Doctor appointment in the neighboring town and traveled by car for 10 hours .... so tired and exhausted) ........ - We must keep pleasant memories, even if the door will be closed. - The darkness and evil will always fool around the corner. - Nette, your poem is beautiful and a little sad. - Good luck in the contest. - See you tomorrow. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)