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Took the Fall

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Took the Fall

Hard lessons learned,
And a world of lies,
So much to do,
Before my heart dies,

I'll never understand,
The obsession in your mind,
For this type of problem,
A solution is so hard to find,

You don't want any help, 
Wanna be left to drown,
So I'll walk away one last time,
Can't believe you let me down,

Not easily hurt,
Usually a fighter through it all,
Giving up now,
Because I foolishly took the fall.

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  1. Date: 5/2/2013 12:34:00 PM
    Very nice. Well done enjoyed.