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Sedoka 5

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Below is the poem entitled Sedoka 5 which was written by poet Timothy Hicks. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Sedoka 5

biting hard his cigar
the wealthy man
smirks at smoke rings

the closest thing
to a halo
he'll ever get

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  1. Date: 5/2/2013 12:32:00 AM

    Loved it Tim! I am still smiling. Aloha

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/2/2013 12:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Why thank you Connie! Nice of you to stop by...
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 9:25:00 PM

    This is stunning. You build an image like an architect and connect that image with an idea beautifully. Great work!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/2/2013 12:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow, Sean! That's quite the compliment. I see you are fan of sedoka :)
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 2:01:00 PM

    Self made halos are always the worst kind, good write Tim. Take care, Richard

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/2/2013 12:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Self made halos... I love how you thought of that.I feel a joining of minds, here :)
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 12:50:00 PM

    How sad and true. Well constructed words of wisdom... 'smoke rings as halo's'.. I like that.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/2/2013 12:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks once again Kim!
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 6:59:00 AM

    This is good. Have a great day Tiim.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/1/2013 10:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Rick... you as well :)
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 6:15:00 AM

    Right on, Timothy...clever and entertaining!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/1/2013 10:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Caleb!