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Memories beyond the door

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Memories beyond the door

Blinded by tears that refuse to flow
Cornered by fears that refuse to go
I stand alone,
The emptiness inside is not a sign of calm 
rather forbades the approaching storm,
The pain of loneliness is no longer a respite
the cup is full now… needs to tide
I need a shoulder to cry on,
To wail, to weep, to sob, to sigh
to breach the wall that stands so high.


1st May 2013

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  1. Date: 2/1/2014 11:00:00 PM

    I really like this one. It speaks of that pain that we just sometimes feel so strongly. GREAT last two lines.

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 6:59:00 PM

    painful and lovely....hope you found that shoulder...standing alone is one of the most difficult challenges in life...on this site you will find friends, I'm certain. (and I would be honored...)..Victoria

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 12:25:00 PM

    Congrats!! That was beautiful. Sometimes you have to let your emotions out. Tears are not weakness. It shows strength to admit that you hurt. Very nice.

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 1:38:00 AM

    Beautiful Afroze. Many congrats dear.When are you coming to Nagpur?

    Ali Avatar Afroze Ali Date: 5/10/2013 5:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Tahera, Reaching MB on 17th. kids are already there. see you soon.
  1. Date: 5/9/2013 11:31:00 PM

    many congrats on your win in the contest

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 5:03:00 PM

    Sometimes that's the healthiest way to go. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 1:49:00 PM

    Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 1:02:00 PM

    Congrats on your win.