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  1. Date: 2/17/2014 12:36:00 PM

    David, is this true? I know their were medical problems, but I thought that all was well....I am so sorry. love and hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 2/3/2014 5:54:00 PM

    been there hard to bear, colour gone now black n white, catch another horse ole mate, saddle up an treat her right :{

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 9:21:00 PM

    David~ ive no clue what ur going through in your personal life. Im a bit worried after reading the comments. I have been gone for a long time. I just wanted to stop by and tell u hello~ and that I still love ur writing...hope u are well :) xoxo

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 5:28:00 PM

    we grow an make great poetry a shame ,that it has to hurt, but life is full of hardship, spring up boy can work.... all good here mate.....

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 4:39:00 PM

    So sad David if only we could be of any help [sigh]. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 6:37:00 AM

    hauntingly sad David and a fine tribute too I can feel your pain dear man excellent write Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 3:40:00 AM

    I WISH....Somehow...I could shoulder your pain...give you rest...Has been along HAUL...AND YOU HAVE BEEN Her HERO...THROUGH IT ALL! Great to see you back my friend...One Day at a time

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 9:43:00 AM

    Soup mail.... TEX

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 8:30:00 PM

    Never say goodbye...this is a heart breaking words are with you. Poetry releases the negative vibes. you are a wonderful poet...cheers !

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 9:52:00 PM

    Be strong,,,Never stop writing it eases the pain

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 4:03:00 AM

    Hi David.......Your poems always take me on an emotional journey of all kinds....this one is no exception. I thank Poetry each day for the ability to express feelings and emotion.......Shaz

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 8:31:00 AM

    David my heart goes out to you and your family, contact me when you are able to... Seren

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 6:40:00 AM

    This is from april, i do not see any more post. you have given me so much encouragement i wish i could give you some of the love you showed me

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 12:06:00 AM

    Well this is very sad,, I wish everything to be ok for you and family

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 6:18:00 AM

    Good morning David, Wishing every Father on the soup a Happy Father's Day.... xox...Linda

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 5:56:00 PM

    My most heartfelt sympathy for what has happened to inspire this. Hoping and praying for strength and peace for you

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 4:29:00 PM

    David, I just came here knowing that your daughter has regained consciousness, right? I hope you might send me a quick note to get me up to speed. I have thought from time to time about you and your daughter, and also your wife, and I pray they are all right. Please start writing again too! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 12:50:00 PM

    sad verse. Simon

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 5:42:00 AM

    Hi David just to send you my best wishes in your hour of trouble, hope it all comes good for you my friend, all the best as always Owen

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 5:05:00 PM

    powerful write, my friend. So glad to hear the great news. Love to you all

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 4:07:00 PM

    This is a really powerful write with so much expression. It's very sad but beautiful. I miss you! xxoo Holly Moore

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 12:04:00 PM

    This poem is heart wrenching.I can never fully feel the pain you re describing but I can understand and it mists my eyes...Special poem indeed.

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 11:19:00 AM

    Very sad, David. Sending a warm smile your way. :-)

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 4:46:00 AM

    David i am so deeply hurt for your pain, sad so sad, how i wish it never happened. God Bless your family , and gives you strength. I will pray for your family. Love Terry

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 4:34:00 PM

    David It hurts to see you hurt so much. May your heart heal and some light return to your days.. Hugs, SuZ

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 3:20:00 PM

    oh my goodness. is this the poem mandy mentioned in her blog. I am SO sorry, DAvid. I had no idea you were going thru something so difficult. So many hard things for you this past year. I will pray for you and yours. The poem is very good because it SHOWS the pain!

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 1:06:00 PM

    David,we`re sending our love and warm thoughts across the fjord.Just heard about your daughter.Take your time buddy,and know that me and my family will always be there if needed.Take care,Dave..

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 7:27:00 AM

    David, prayers for you!

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 5:25:00 PM

    This is very Sad David, I'm hoping your wife has not been taken, I feel nothing but sorrow. :-( :-( after reading your poem. Nothing heals, once a part of you has been taken, ... I can pour my heart out right now. But, crying is never gonna do me good. Soup mail.... DAVID..... always~ TEX

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 9:35:00 PM

    Nothing to say except many of us have been there too and do know this pain...and loneliness..a new light will shine sorry...