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Sedoka 4

Timothy Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Sedoka 4 which was written by poet Timothy Hicks. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Sedoka 4

purposely
exposed to the sun,
an I, Spy book

but the sparkle
in my daughter's eyes tells me
I'm done searching

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  1. Date: 5/4/2013 7:31:00 AM

    Daughter??? Are congratulations in order?

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/4/2013 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well I don't wanna give you the wrong idea. No this is just my imagination at work... if I ever become a father I will let you know!
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 6:24:00 PM

    Very touching Tim, I know this feeling oh so well. Beautiful write. Take care, Richard

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 4/30/2013 11:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm still a long way away form honestly knowing this feeling. Nonetheless I like to write about it...
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 1:51:00 PM

    Her father's eyes ... Enjoy your sedoka,sweet and love Timothy! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 4/30/2013 11:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are a very good friend to me... thanks for continuing to be yourself :)
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 1:38:00 PM

    Aw, this is a very stunning and touching piece of work. It is so rewarding to see things through someone else's eyes, especially our loved ones. This spoke close to my heart. Loved it. Always, Laura

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 4/30/2013 11:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Very true Laura... thanks for reading and your kind review.