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Love's a Hidden Treasure

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Love's a Hidden Treasure

your skin smells like the passion fruit, 
blossoming delightfully as the white rose 
during the arrival of the dawn
my ears cling on to your violin voice 
and leaps like a lamb as you 
whisper miracles in my ear 
I feel like I belong - 
I'll try to wipe away your tears of 
salty seawater  
as my hands collide from my black, velvety sleeves, 
it reminds me of your pleasant touch... 

In my quietude, 
I wait for you all 
day and night...
my heart pounds with excitement 
as I lie with you 
as the sun descends...
going under the hills
so that we can spend the rest of our lives 

together 

I Found You Like Hidden Treasure

Our love brews and I feel renewed - no longer unsure

This moment is beyond measure!

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  1. Date: 5/2/2013 7:30:00 PM

    THis is beautifully romantic. love the line " my ears cling to your violin voice". Love the climactic last lines also