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Odd, Triumphant One

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Odd, Triumphant One

Keep your head up high!
Bon Voyage! 
Odd,
Triumphant
One - dwelling in light 
Let your courage soar with joy 
I've dream'd of angels - cradling me close
Your legacy's hidden - you deserve glory
Blessings belong to you - you must go 
So, farewell to you...until
We meet again - wishing you the best 
As you travel on before the warm sunrise
Embraces you with sunlit honour
Let your freedom of speech soar
Are you still brave, odd
Triumphant
One?
Sail to shore,
Oh! Vigilant MATE!

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 5:39:00 PM

    You have captured the dichotomy of life in this work. Thanks for all you write.

    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal Date: 4/29/2013 5:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Duke! Thanks a bill! :)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 1:58:00 AM

    - David, this is gorgeous! - I want to read more, you have written today. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal Date: 4/29/2013 5:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Go right ahead, Anne! You could read as many as you want! :-)
    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal Date: 4/29/2013 5:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thankx tremendously btw