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Sedoka 3

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Below is the poem entitled Sedoka 3 which was written by poet Timothy Hicks. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Sedoka 3

green tea bleeds into
the clear undisturbed water
creating waves of steam

much like my son,
sweet or bitter when mature,
he warms me either way

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 8:02:00 PM
    Good piece Tim... Well done~A.O

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 4/29/2013 11:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Abdul :)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 3:19:00 PM
    Sweet as sugared tea, Tim! Did you see charles' Haiku non contest? Go read the rules and you will read what happened in my bear story!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 4/29/2013 7:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Just checked it out... brutal stuff! Good luck on the contest :)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 7:04:00 AM
    When I see the name of this form I always think of sudoku. Good poem Tim.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 4/29/2013 10:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha! Never thought of that before, but I can see the resemblance. Glad you liked :)