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the rank scent of bear

where a sleeping bag lies empty near the shelter. . . the rank scent of bear For the The NO Contest, Contest Poetry Contest of Charles Henderson

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  1. Date: 5/7/2013 6:47:00 PM

    Wow! you are prolific. Fine work... Congrats... Jack

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 1:18:00 AM

    congratulations Andrea!!!!

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 3:47:00 PM

    wow, just awesome

  1. Date: 5/4/2013 9:20:00 AM

    Congrats Andrea~A.O

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 7:57:00 PM

    Congratulations Andrea, your the top star today love xxx

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 5:38:00 PM

    Andrea I knew this would be a winner. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 11:21:00 AM

    Congratulations. I love the humor and truth you have written.

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 11:00:00 AM

    Big congrats, Andrea!

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 7:06:00 AM

    I knew this gem would make it to the top spot. Congratulations and well done, Andrea. :)

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 6:17:00 AM

    Top spot and what a winner xx Busy time but thanks for asking Andy hope to get back into full swing soon xx

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 12:11:00 AM

    I presume the occupant is safely up a tree somewhere.... Congrats on your 1st place win, Andrea. Love, Su

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 10:10:00 PM

    Congratulations on this #1 finish!

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 9:32:00 PM

    Andrea, love the way your poem made it... always enjoy reading your work... :-)...PD

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 6:57:00 PM

    this is awesome.I just entered in the typewriter contest.first time to just pick a subject and write only about mind just went was nice cause i needed a break from here for a minute.this was a no contest for first place.good job.take care

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 3:41:00 PM

    Congrats Andrea This story goes far beyond the words. SuZ

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 3:32:00 PM

    Not a pretty picture. But a good and popular win. Congratulations.- Red

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 3:19:00 PM

    Congratulations Petal, it's about time you won something lol. I told you, 'If you go down to the woods today you're in for a nice suprise', and you got one

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 2:56:00 PM

    Excellent're a 10 with me but could only click on the 7 Congratulations....

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 2:43:00 PM

    Excellent!!........and we know Charles is a good judge of haiku !!!! Congrats on your well deserved top place once again!!

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 1:03:00 PM

    Oh my Andrea..Its' barely worth' contemplating on the fate of the former sleeper, but i am contemplating the upward trajectory of this little piece..' Joe..)

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 1:42:00 AM

    I can sense both the sleeping bag & bear's scent in your great haiku poem my dearest friend, Andrea! I love it! Good luck and best wishes always! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 7:09:00 PM

    If you go down to the woods today, Oh, we been there already aint we lol, This has left me speechless Petal, don't be cruel, I love bears lol. Left you a note on my friends poem. Take care, Richard

    Seal Avatar Richard D Seal Date: 4/30/2013 7:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No I have not, its on hurricane, I think lol
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 4:19:00 PM

    Oh yes, I can just imagine that camper running for their life. Haha. Loved it!

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 11:33:00 AM

    Totally devoid of humanity.:)

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 10:45:00 AM

    Oh Dear, this is real, does the imagination after work this out,, well certainly gives one heaps to think about.....

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 10:38:00 AM

    The most like beef...hmmm...well, elk and deer have a very similar texture, but only taste like beef if you do them in a pot roast or stew...or chili...then you can't tell the difference.

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 8:51:00 AM

    Whew! A real punch with that last line! I'm glad I never went camping with you! I could just see you, "Oh, someone is getting mauled by a bear. Let me go get my writing tablet!" Well, the captcha is SNAX! Don't that beat all?

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 8:26:00 AM

    Empty sleeping bag carries pleasant smell of bear near the shelter attracts nicely. Excellent haiku with very new style, enjoyed a lot. Always best wishes to you. Thanks....., loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 12:25:00 AM

    Excellent. Lovely haiku. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 11:20:00 AM

    Well done!!Nothing is coming in my mind :(