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A Ripple In Time

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A Ripple In Time

A new borns cry
Tearful last good bye

Swaying waves of golden prairie grass
Shifting desert dunes - an hour glass

An acorn dropping among forest leaves
To mighty oak - a lifetime of dreams

The changing moon - to full again
Each morn' the sun - new skies begin

Eagles soar high - our hearts go there
These ripples in time - we all share

©Donna Jones

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  1. Date: 3/13/2014 7:43:00 PM

    Donna, Donna, what a lovely write! I read this poem, four times. I could feel your soul in this beautiful poem. Thank you for sharring, Donna Jones

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/13/2014 10:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much Larry...glad you enjoyed..made my day..:-)
  1. Date: 2/5/2014 8:32:00 AM

    just love this poem. It's perfect. Adding you to my favorites.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/5/2014 10:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A wonderful compliment Randy...thank you.
  1. Date: 12/24/2013 12:44:00 PM

    You know I always love your writing.... This one take its place on a list of well deserved winners.... I've got a lot of catching up to do. I just came home today from rehab on a hip replacement. I was in since 11/12/13 and didn't have a lot of access to the site..... Love ya and Merry Christmas to you and yours..... Jake

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/5/2014 10:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks much Jake...how's the rehab going? Should be well on the way to good by now.I hope so..:-)
  1. Date: 12/21/2013 9:29:00 PM

    Very touching poem worded with nice poetic rhythm. Enjoyed very lately. Loved always,my friend, bl

  1. Date: 12/21/2013 8:22:00 AM

    I like this as it makes me remember

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/5/2014 10:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello....thanks so much....very kind....
  1. Date: 12/21/2013 12:11:00 AM

    GREAT POEM BY ALL STANDARDS. JM

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/5/2014 10:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks soooo much...
  1. Date: 12/20/2013 8:04:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this poem and others you've written. Very, very nice work.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/5/2014 9:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much John....a lot!
  1. Date: 12/20/2013 7:15:00 PM

    A beautiful poetic compendium of nature,day,night and the eagle all sharing a ripple of time. Great Write, Donna!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/5/2014 10:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Ralph
  1. Date: 12/20/2013 6:58:00 PM

    !!!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/5/2014 10:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-) :-) :-)
  1. Date: 12/20/2013 3:39:00 PM

    A very good poem Donna, I enjoyed reading it...Hugs....Roger

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 2/5/2014 10:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Roger....better late than never huh? Sorry....I'm behind....thanks so much for stopping...
  1. Date: 12/20/2013 3:31:00 PM

    Well Donna, You have certainly come a long way since your first poems. This one is very, very good as well as the others on your "best" list. I like the title. It reminds me of a book I read. Cheers, Roy

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 12/21/2013 10:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Roy...need to come check out your latest also..what do you mean my best list? I'm clueless here..anyway glad you liked it..thanks...
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 8:19:00 PM

    'Ripples in time'...sounds almost existential. That line was so good. May I borrow it? Allan

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 12/21/2013 10:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad you like...its a contest line..you must ask whoever promoted the contest..-..thanks for stopping by
  1. Date: 8/1/2013 1:25:00 PM

    This was really lovely to read Donna.I love the contrasting mix of imagery that adds beauty to this piece.Well done!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 12/21/2013 10:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank. So much.:-) nice to see you
  1. Date: 5/27/2013 9:56:00 PM

    a pretty poem. Donna, what a lovely ending....... SKAT

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/28/2013 6:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks skat!!!!! You're sweet..
  1. Date: 5/27/2013 7:48:00 PM

    sorry for the 3 comments i left on this poem... lol, make this one the 4th.... :-)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/28/2013 6:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Always glad to see you....
  1. Date: 5/27/2013 7:47:00 PM

    Donna, coming back to this poem... II just want you to know I added this poem to my favorite list... after reading it again for the 5th time... xox~ Linda

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/27/2013 9:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That is so awesome Linda...thanks..I've been caught up..with family over the holiday weekend..will try to catch up some tomorrow....this is a great honor..:-)
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 9:07:00 PM

    Donna, a nice ripple in time winning poem... it was a joy coming back here to read all of Gail's winning poem... Always & Forever xox~ Linda

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/18/2013 9:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Linda ..nice to see ya, thanks..I've gone to enter your last two contests but was too late...I must make more time!
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 7:24:00 PM

    I can see why this is in the top four. I enjoyed reading it again.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/15/2013 9:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Good evening Richard..thanks...:-)
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 2:53:00 PM

    wonderful poem. Congrats on your win!!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/15/2013 3:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks....:-)
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 11:23:00 AM

    a nice A Ripple In time winning poem :-) Congrats *LUV ~SKAT~

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/15/2013 3:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you SKAT.....:-)
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 10:56:00 AM

    gREAT DJ. CONGRATS. GL

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/15/2013 3:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi.....hey thanks.....
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 9:11:00 PM

    Hi Donna, congratulations on your win, well deserved. Love Terry xoxo.....a 7>>

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/14/2013 9:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Lady Terry....you made me smile again...love your visits too..
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 8:01:00 PM

    congrats on a fine win Donna

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/14/2013 8:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-) always so good to join you on your flights Joseph....always love to see you have visited...the only time I dream of traveling anymore...and thanks....:-)
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 5:20:00 PM

    I don't see how anyone could find anything but contentment in your words... Congrats on your win... Your poem left me with a deep peaceful feeling..... Hugs.... Jake

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/14/2013 8:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jake you're a breath of fresh air...thanks friend..
  1. Date: 5/9/2013 7:31:00 PM

    This is great Donna. You certainly found things that could be called ripples even though they are very important to another. I hadn't figured out exactly what she wanted so haven't entred. I think you have hit it. Thanks for being so kind in your messages. Love, Joyce

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/14/2013 8:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you joyce...very kind...
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 7:47:00 AM

    Creative thought and rhyme Donna!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/5/2013 10:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks..
  1. Date: 5/4/2013 5:45:00 PM

    This is beautiful Donna, excellent flow and images. I can see the eagles soaring. Best of luck in the contest. Take care, Richard

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/5/2013 10:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Richard..:-)
  1. Date: 5/4/2013 11:28:00 AM

    Oh....this is just so beautiful....softly so!! Nicely done, Donna.....I love this one!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/4/2013 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-) much appreciated
  1. Date: 5/3/2013 5:17:00 PM

    A definite winner in my opinion! Lovely flowing couplets full of sweet language and vivid imagery. So much to consider in so few lines. BRAVO Donna! Best wishes, Keith (PS thanks so much for your comments on 'Middlebrook.)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/3/2013 6:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for always being supportive...and I do think you are awesome!
  1. Date: 5/3/2013 10:55:00 AM

    Donna This gave a wonderful sense of time passing. It is a definite winner. SuZ

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/3/2013 1:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Appreciate your kindness...thanks
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