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The Kiss of Dawn

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The Kiss of Dawn

Your enchanting words
The kiss of dawn on my lips
Tender awak’ning

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 1:22:00 PM
    A very heart-warming Haiku, as always. :)

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 4/30/2013 2:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Drake! Why...thanks ever so much! Smiles right back at ya! :)
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 12:50:00 PM
    Wow!

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 4/30/2013 2:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Thanks, Kash! Lovely to hear from you!
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 9:09:00 AM
    I figured that Perhaps I Was a Bit Naive (really should have made that a shorter title, btw) was getting a little too "overloaded" with comments... so I'll respond to you here ;) If I ever do decide to visit that part of the world, I know who's house to drop by for sure! I'm not much of a world traveler - aside from the one time I visited Europe - now THAT was fun!

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 4/30/2013 2:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No worries, my dear. Knowing your mind...I now you will make it here sometime. I just hope I'm around to make it a memorable time for ya! :) Hugs!
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 5:40:00 AM
    This is how I like to be woken up, but usually around midday lol, Just lovely this Eileen, well done. Take care, Richard

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 4/28/2013 6:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well...we all have what makes us happy, n'est pas? ;) Thanks for the visit.
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 4:42:00 AM
    Eileen, this little post displays your mastery of the haiku. Clever and talented use of an apostrophe... Great job... Hugs to ya..... Jake

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 4/28/2013 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm glad I get some commendation on this particular form, for I often have doubts whether I'm getting it right. Thank you! :)
  1. Date: 4/27/2013 11:20:00 PM
    Nice descriptiveness in only a few words.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 4/28/2013 6:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm not usually one of few words...the form rules over me! :) Thank you for the post.
  1. Date: 4/27/2013 10:32:00 PM
    Very sensual. To be honest, when I try haiku I try to make it as basic as possible, in terms of descriptions. But the more poetic haiku are still treats to read (especially yours). Sounds to me like you know HOW to wake up in the morning... lol.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 4/28/2013 6:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ;) Mornings ARE my favorite time of day. I'm a total fruitcake at night. I fall asleep mid sentence and then talk jibberish. My friends and family get a kick out of watching me struggle to make sense...Mornings...I'm lucid, alive, and on top of the world. Your way is how haiku is supposed to be...I just HAVE to wax eloquent...DRAMA QUEEN ME!
  1. Date: 4/27/2013 10:06:00 PM
    So pretty just like you....

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 4/27/2013 10:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    MD....you are a sweetheart. What would I do without your love and messages in my life? I'd miss something very valuable!