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The Typewriter

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled The Typewriter which was written by poet Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The Typewriter

Some winter day,
In Orson's realm...
Or was it just a film?

One Paris night,
Along The Seine streams...
Or was it in my dreams?

I saw them, spies,
I heard all the cries...
Or had I been dreaming?

A machine gun
Would not stop to run...
Or was it still this film?

I woke up, then,
To grab a new pen...
Could THAT all make MY film?

The typewriter
let her fingers run...
WHO'LL STOP THIS MACHINE GUN!?

(Written on 04/27/2013)

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  1. Date: 10/23/2013 5:10:00 PM
    THIS IS VERY NICLY WRITTEN AND I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing. Blessings.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 10:27:00 PM
    Aha, I HAVE met you before. I see that I had commented to this one and you replied to my comment several months ago. I will say goodnight to you now!

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 10/7/2013 12:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for coming so often to pay a visit to my poems and add new comments, dear Andrea! It"s true that the mood of the day can change our interpretation of a text we "ve already known before; and suddenly comes a new image, a new aspect, new sounds and new colours! So, you are welcome at any time! Hugs, Hanitra
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 7:26:00 AM
    Cool ending, my friend. I like poems with a good punchline and this is it. Lovely writing. :-)

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 10/4/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I can't help punching at anything, any thought, anyone coming across; for fun and play... off curse!(^_^) Have a nice time, Lysia, and many many thanks for the read!
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 3:47:00 PM
    nicely penned...best wishes in the contest

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 10/4/2013 9:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    On my way to pay a visit to your latest poems, dear Joseph! Thanks for the read!
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 3:08:00 AM
    so visual so creative,,,

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 5/5/2013 3:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much for your visit, Harry! Have a nice weekend! Love, Hanitra
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 1:53:00 AM
    I sure like how you picked up speed and started writing like crazy at the end. COOL.

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 5/5/2013 3:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, Andrea! Happy that you got the message! I'm not always that sure that the images are expressive enough and your comments help a lot! Thank you very much for your visit and GOOD LUCK for the contest! You wrote a nice text as always! Love, Hanitra
  1. Date: 4/27/2013 6:44:00 PM
    I just love it! So creative. Hugs Rick. I am honored you like my form.

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 4/27/2013 7:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It has right away been a real pleasure, Rick! Just from the beginning! I love this rhythm and the concept is so simple, you are such a genius! Thank you for this uplifting visit! Have a nice weekend! Love, Hanitra