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My Fantasy Journey

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My Fantasy Journey

My name,written in the sand
Washed away..brought to the sea
Carried with the stream to unfamilier waters
Timeless journey..to where my imagination takes me

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Somewhere..in a distant place
Another fantasy ride,lounches out to the univers
The stars along the way..like little gems,untouched emeralds
Here`s one..oh,and another one there..I`ll just pick them all

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If the sun had a dark side
I would land my space ship there
Seeking..just might find a new paradise out there
Million lightyears closer to the creater of our existence

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I`m back on my beach now
Again I write my name in the sand
This time it remains..guarded by my dream
Coz...when I open my eyes..life hasn`t changed after all


A.Ertsland

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  1. Date: 5/19/2013 3:14:00 PM
    Hello Arlid, it was nice hearing from you today. I haven't been up to much. well ;-) I am faithful to my restaurant now. I stopped taking all the vacations I took last year. Working Monday - Saturdays. Maybe this is the reason I've become a bit tired. Now I have to enjoy the soup the most i can on Sunday's and Saturday's... on the weekdays I can only snoop my comments and mail... which is a good thing, I make time to keep up with all contest here. anyways... I thought I'd share my now moments with you... always~ Tiger Tex..

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    Date: 5/20/2013 4:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks sweetie!:-) i love that when you share your moments with me! love always
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 11:44:00 PM
    You are quite the writer ;} I like your dreams ;} you have a fantastical day ;} oh, thank you for liking my I'll Say Good - by Now. I was around 18 and I was trying to figure out a "nice" way of telling a guy, I didn't want to hang out with him anymore ;}

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    Date: 5/1/2013 7:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Debbie! i love seeing you here:)
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 3:38:00 PM
    Good to be reading you my brother.. Been busy with poetry talks and working on my 3rd book... Please excuse my absence.. Michael

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    Date: 5/1/2013 7:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Mike,its good to hear you`re busy:)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 3:31:00 PM
    Just came back to remind you how good this one is!! Did you do that contest with the bear in the story? The answer to whether anyone gets eaten is on his contest page!

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    Date: 5/1/2013 7:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    i`ll check it out Andrea.thanks for stopping by again:)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 9:45:00 AM
    Good morning Arlid, I see a big s.o.s. around your dream cloud. I can feel two worlds hiding in between when you open your eyes. The first one, would be that your paradise all starts with you. The second world... well you are not in it... LOL... JK... I like your fantasy journey,... I have one 2 but, my fantasy journey would have 2 pina colodas on the side. I like the rising sun in your timeless journey. I am so happy you are on a diet. I hope it's a diet that has inspired this write. Diets are good for the soul. PAINFUL BUT GOOD. xox~ Tiger Tex

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    Date: 4/29/2013 9:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    "if i wasn`t" that should be.my bad typo:-)
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    Date: 4/29/2013 9:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol..it was a forced-diet..I would be 6 feet under i wasn`t:-)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 2:15:00 AM
    I love the way you use Creation to pursue your dreams.. the last stanza says it all-- we need to live aour dreams, not hold on to them. Nicely penned.

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    Date: 4/29/2013 9:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Kim:) yes,live like today`s our last! my rule of life:-)
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 7:07:00 AM
    i love the fanciful expressions in this beautiful poem of love. line 1 is a great opener and the rest of the piece flows from it... ohh what a great sunday offering, arild!...:)

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    Date: 4/28/2013 8:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :-)
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 6:20:00 AM
    Excellent poem, Arild. I have been on many of these fantasy rides. So nice to see something from you, it's been a while... hugs, Catie :)

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    Date: 4/28/2013 6:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Catie:-) Really appriciated you stopping by.Yeah..I know,its been too long:)
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 12:59:00 AM
    This is REALLY good, ARild!! gosh, I read it a second time and it truly is superb!! A fave on this one!!

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    Date: 4/28/2013 3:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Andrea:) Its Nice to see you again!