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HOSTILE HEAD TAKEOVER PART 2

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HOSTILE HEAD TAKEOVER PART 2

A din ensued
my imaginary brood
with a good dose of misapprehension
hauled out their toys
and with a deafening noise
held band practice to demand my attention


My head resounded
I was astounded
as my voices insisted space be freed
then took up position
for a spit competition
unless their demand I would heed

"Spit all you may
I refuse to be swayed
back to your cupboard, skeleton folk
all was well hitherto
with my self-made crew
till my head friends you chose to provoke."


"Dear host, you're unfeeling
to your good sense we're appealing
repeal the bones' non grata status
or your imaginary crew
will hold a coup
assisted by our posse comitatus." 

"Skeletons and friends
your logic transcends
admittedly you've much courage and clout
I'll have to engage
with our very own sage
the inimitable Shadow of Doubt.

"After due consultation 
and much deliberation
Shadow and I decision had reached
you may rant;  you may rave
do the Mexican wave
yet still be punished for my rules you have breached.

"The imagineries and Hubbard
to inhabit the cupboard
access to my head is forever denied
you skeletons will hoard 
keep my secrets well-stored
in my head where you henceforth will reside."

There's no happy ever after
my world is now dafter
cramped, the skeletons keep knotting their chains
with more space at hand
my imaginary band
multiplied.  I'm now doubly insane

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  1. Date: 11/30/2013 3:31:00 PM
    Lysia you are some poet, this was an incredible read. Anyone with mind troubles {which is all of us] should read these wonderful words. thank s for the read, my friend....peter

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 2:29:00 PM
    Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm a fan

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 5:47:00 PM
    I totally forgot to check out the second part! I LOVE IT! Just as fantastic as part one! You rock my lady, I absolutely love the way you write!

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 4:23:00 PM
    Haha, you are thoroughly cracked and I love it. I have never read something so impossibly posible. Smiles

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 11:14:00 AM
    both super Delysia, great stuff xx

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 2:26:00 PM
    Sophisticated language in this write Delysia - powerful lesson of trust and cooperation - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 10:40:00 AM
    You take the reader on a most insanely wild journey. The theme and imagery combined created a fantastic experience for the reader. Exceptional !

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 8:52:00 PM
    You have done it again, fascinated me with your whimsical words. fine poetry. Thanks for your visit to hillbilly hand jive.

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 1:44:00 PM
    Fascinating plots,licia... reminds me of Steven Spielberg's series , Amazing Stories... great job, you wordsmith! : ) huggs

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 7:46:00 PM
    Hollywood and TV need talent like you--but I'm glad you share here!!

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 7:13:00 PM
    Hello Delysia, :-) I'm taking this moment to wish you an early Happy Mother's day. Just in case, I can't hang around the soup past Saturday Night. May you enjoy all the blessings a mother engraves in our hearts. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 4:22:00 AM
    Great rhythm, rhyme and flow to this work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Those things in the cupboard well I would be afraid to open mine..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 10:40:00 AM
    Both 're great... well done~A.O

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 2:59:00 PM
    Great work and Congratulations on the win. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 11:44:00 AM
    good morning, thanks for your morning visit.

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 6:31:00 PM
    This deserves congrats on both pages Delysia, well done. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 5/4/2013 2:41:00 PM
    Cute piece. It is right to write...

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 5:48:00 PM
    Hey Delsyia, great poem. The rhyming scheme is one I use a lot myself, however, I combine lines 1&2 and 4&5 so that it forms an internal rhyme, then you are left with 4 lines per stanza instead of six. Makes for easier reading, I think. Also, if you have multiple parts, post them in reverse order. That way they show up in order on your page. Love it! Cheers, Roy

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 4:40:00 PM
    Sometimes there's no truce in that war, very well done, blessings Carl

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 4:14:00 PM
    Have re-read, have to stop now though, I don't em latching onto me, toooo susceptible lol

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