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HOSTILE HEAD TAKEOVER PART 1

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HOSTILE HEAD TAKEOVER PART 1

I'm near cuckoo
This Monday blue
A day not eas'ly recommended
for making sense
I'm way too tense
And hung-over to comprehend it
 
My mind's on the bend
my imaginary friends
are threatening to abandon en masse
I was perfectly sane
till they pissed in my brain
negotiations are at an impasse
 
It pains me to mention
the bone of contention
menacing our peaceful existence
my voices of own creation
went above their station
with mutinous and unfair persistence

Old Mother Hubbard
had sneaked to the cupboard
to steal skeleton bones for her yapper
the skeletons in-wait
welcomed their bait
with little resistance managed to trap her
 
As to why she'd no clue
their demands were few
and until met they'd keep her as hostage
twixt two skeletons squeezed
the hag was well-pleased
only in dreams she was ever in bondage
 
The skeletons vacated
on their long-awaited
crusade for their rights to be equal
a sudden scurry in my head
when the voices I have bred
became hushed, which was rather unusual
 
The spokes-skeleton
passed a colorless wind
voiced their single demand:  to remain
"We were made to vanish
to a dark cupboard banished
we demand henceforth to share your domain."
 
A resounding "No!
You'll stay down below
we're totaling 20, including the yapper
there's hardly space
the din to embrace
and an hour-long queue to the crapper."
 
"Then the beldam Hubbard
will remain in the cupboard
lore would have it, bare to the bone
the cupboard, that is
not the hag, whose Maltese
diced up raw will be fed to the crone.

We implore you most
kindly engage our host
in negotiations and if necessary plead
we want into his brain
and share your domain
or prepare for a skeleton stampede."


PART 2 TO FOLLOW.  THIS MIGHT TAKE A WHILE, AS I'M LOCKED IN HOSTILE NEGOTIATIONS
 


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  1. Date: 10/3/2013 4:24:00 PM

    I don't like to admit it but I really relate to this poem hahaha. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 2:26:00 PM

    Excellent whimsical poem by a very good poet. Nicely done.

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 4:05:00 PM

    Wow, what a tale. Congrats to you, Im off to read part two. Ty for reading my dribble...,

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 7:09:00 AM

    Tis is a great rhyme, full of humor. Congrats on your fantastic win. Well deserve. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 8:26:00 PM

    I'm aready becoming a fan, Licia!! Congratulations on your win! Well done! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 7:32:00 PM

    Delysia, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... :-) nice entry, for Anne's any poem contest. always & forever ** LINDA

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 2:54:00 PM

    The limerick-like rhythm proved to fit the content perfectly. Congrats are well deserved.... extra hugs to ya... Jake

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 2:36:00 PM

    I just got one thing to say...You're FUNNY... Sheer comic genius here and I did not know you were from South Africa either...As for the negotions, I realize that you have a bone to pick with the skeletons but please be easy on them (they crack and break down easily) and I would hate to see a fractured relationship as a result...maybe you could just throw them a bone to placate them...and PLEASE don't let them anywhere NEAR your closets..

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 12:55:00 PM

    Congrats, Delysia. Glad to see us three home girls featured in a row :-). As Wilma said, we were surly blessed with some nice warm weather today. Love, Su

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 12:54:00 PM

    What a delightful trip you took with this. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 11:54:00 AM

    Congratulations Delysia, enjoyed this, I really did! Hope you enjoyed the warm weather today my friend ;) love Wilma

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 10:31:00 AM

    This poem took me on a ride!! Haha, I loved it! Congrats on your win in my contest- thanks for participating! :)

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 2:23:00 PM

    Magnificent psychology and humor in this composition Delysia - you make the science of Mind melodramatic in a merry way - I congratulate you on your unique style - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 12:49:00 PM

    WOW. amazing creativity with even more amazing imagery. Epic writing flair

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 9:00:00 AM

    Looks like your back on top of your game m'lady...I told you it was only a matter of time because you needed some breathing room to clear your head and WOW - you surely did clear your head and re-filled it with some wonderful new poetic stuff. Congrats on a well deserved win...Terry

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 10:20:00 AM

    Congrats on your win~A.O

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 2:56:00 PM

    This is good. I'm going on to the next one...... Lucy

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 1:54:00 PM

    very imaginative. And I see this won a contest? The crazy one?? big congrats then. It was GREAT for that contest!!!

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 6:27:00 PM

    Well done you nutter lol, I knew this would win, they don't come any crazier than the real thing lol. Big congrats to you on writing a brilliant poem. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 6:16:00 AM

    big congrats on your win Delysia

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 5:26:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win, Delysia! Crazy!

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 10:53:00 PM

    Great poem that was, in deed! Big congrats.

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 8:48:00 PM

    This is great. I love the spokes-skeleton. Looking forward to part two. Congratulations...perhaps the Old woman in the shoe can visit...LOL SuZ

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 8:18:00 PM

    wow Delysia, I love the way you brought on the Crazy. Congratulations!!! :-) .....xox..... LINDA

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 8:16:00 PM

    Awesome work Delysia this is creative and entertaining, I'm waiting on bated breath for the sequel to this, congratulations on your 1st place win, xxx

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 8:08:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in my contest. The cream of crazy rose to the top. You are a gifted poet, I enjoyed this one alot.

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 7:50:00 PM

    Delysia, a very cool poem, CONGRATS <3 LUV ~*~SKAT

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 7:47:00 PM

    This is a deserved top spot Delysia..congratulations

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 7:37:00 PM

    Woooof! This is waaaaaaay toooooo gooooood!!! Loved the atmosphere of the poem.... And the flow of your words... Your images are so vivid!! Great job!

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 7:29:00 PM

    wow, I love the hold you took on me when reading your poem. now I must read part #2 xox Linda

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