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The Lure of Society's Ills

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The Lure of Society's Ills

A creature lurks with a formidable eye
using bright color as a disguise
the sting of the fire breathing mastadon
seals the fate of a life gone wrong

Demonic pleasures to be obtained
through taboo-stricken means
and the real scheme being
there's such pleasure to be gained

Larger doses surrender you faster
numb and quell, but quickley to pass
spinning the charms of cursed masters
who seldom watch the hourglass

The excitement woos, enticing your will
now duped, you believe the feeling is real
black widows with venom bring darkness near
into the solemn night, no soft voices here

Intoxication weave's it's heavy glow
as you slither away with no one in tow
going...going...a long way to go,
trapped in time's disturbing woe
under the midnight mural


Karen anglesey 12/22/02

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  1. Date: 10/13/2013 7:18:00 PM

    I have seen some fall into the hands of addiction and their eyes become blind to their actions...this is a well penned powerful piece...your lines are very intense...great write :)

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 10/13/2013 7:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Sandra, thank you for commenting. Always appreciated :)
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 10:56:00 AM

    "trapped in time's disturbing woe"-- Are you kidding me; are you serious? MAN, OH, MAN I wish I had penned that line! It's sickeningly good. The last stanza was suuuuuuu-perb! No, my dear; YOU are the brilliant one. For the love of God and sake of Pete: POST MORE! I need more, Karen!!!!

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 9/10/2013 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sometimes lines come out and then bam...they are in a poem. Thank you for the glowing review !
  1. Date: 8/14/2013 6:33:00 AM

    This poem is quite alluring, very interesting, where do you come up with these??? MC

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 8/14/2013 6:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    MC, thank you for enjoying my poetry. I have written down thoughts (off and on) in a journal for several years. Sometimes they just write themselves into a poem. Thank you for your kind comments :)
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 4:59:00 PM

    Larger doses do surrender you faster! It's a shame we all have a yearning to be numbed, and many numb it with addiction. Awesome poem, I enjoyed it! - Patrick Farley IV

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 8/5/2013 5:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Patrick... thank you very much:)
  1. Date: 8/3/2013 6:18:00 AM

    Karen.....last two lines seal-it! Nice! jimbo

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 8/3/2013 8:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for taking a look...comments much appreciatef
  1. Date: 7/28/2013 1:47:00 PM

    What can I say that hasn't already been said. Brilliant. Looking through life through the bottom of a glass makes for a myopic view of life. Nice work as usual! Kilmer

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/28/2013 3:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for expressing your perceptive observations. Very much appreciated :)
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 7:24:00 PM

    gosh, there is one bad habit that came to my mind reading this one. But is it also discussing some other things? I can think of a few other ills of society when I read this. Great imagery!

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 7/28/2013 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Andrea, I appreciate your perception :)
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 1:54:00 AM

    Karen, this is a Cryptic Classic. One cannot but help understand the pure hell some go through in their addiction.. Your pen uses bitter ink so beautifully.... Love ya..... Jake

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 5/19/2013 1:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jake. thank you for your remarkable thoughts. I am grateful for your astute observation. Have a splendid evening..or very early morning. hugs :)
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 3:49:00 PM

    Karen, it is very intoxicating into the deepest level of poetry... I love it... Linda

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 5/18/2013 5:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sublime evening :)
    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 5/18/2013 5:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Linda, you are very gracious. Thank you from the deepest level of my being. Have a sublime eveing :)
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 1:00:00 PM

    A ttrue Poet, is who you are Karen! This speaks to that and I am honored to read your work. I've read only three of your poems and I'm amazed. Will definitely be adding this to my favs.! Have a great weekend! Love, Annalise

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 5/16/2013 6:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Annalise, I am deeply honored that your remarks are so generous. Thank you so much for the appreciation. Have a beautiful evening:)
  1. Date: 5/9/2013 2:36:00 PM

    I love the gothic mysticism in this composition Karen - we lose ourselves through pleasure, and find ourselves in pain - reminds me of entrapment via unsolicited reincarnation - neat ritual element - J.A.B. %

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 5/11/2013 10:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the insightful review. Have an awesome week !
  1. Date: 5/2/2013 7:57:00 PM

    Wow, you are a true master and I am humbled. I will have to give this one a fav. Thank you for your comments on The Battle of Valleymore.

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 5/4/2013 11:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Terry, thank you for the awesome compliment. I" am now humbled. HAve an awesome day :)
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 1:21:00 PM

    Wowser, another write that drips with talent perception and honesty!

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 5/1/2013 8:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    craig, your reviews are priceless. I am humbled and you give me the lesson I need to learn when writing. Do not hold back. Thank you
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 2:00:00 PM

    Well, I've read his three times and still don't get why it's so good, maybe that's because it's an absolute stunner lol. You're a very talented lady Karen. I steered well clear of this scene, though I know some that did not and the damage it can do. I will return for more. Take care, Richard.

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 4/29/2013 3:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for taking the time to review. Very much appreciated
    Seal Avatar Richard D Seal Date: 4/29/2013 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    and thank you for the reviews on mine, much appreciated
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 8:28:00 AM

    Wow! VERY interesting piece, Karen! That last verse is golden!

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 4/29/2013 9:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Heather, Thank you for generous the review. I appreciate your comments! xx
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 7:21:00 AM

    Wow this is like some snake slithering through your mind love it xx

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 4/29/2013 9:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Mandy, appreciate the visit and comments. Have a wonderful day
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 6:25:00 AM

    This is excellent! And I love the title too...;)

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 4/29/2013 7:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Caleb, thank you for the generous comments.
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 6:58:00 PM

    Wow many new words for me in here, You have your unique way to uttered your muse and inspired people Karen, love your poem :) hug, Yanny

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 4/29/2013 7:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yanny, thank you for the generous comments. You are very much appreciated
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 2:28:00 PM

    This one reminds me...maybe of...heroin addiction. hmmm...very well written. hugs, catie :)

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 4/28/2013 5:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Catie. I wrote this with what I've seen through other's who lost so much with addiction and how it is becoming the downfall of society
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 10:41:00 AM

    The title alone is a poem all in itself! I absolutely love this- I think the last stanza is my favorite. YOU have talent, my lady! Hugs :)

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 4/28/2013 5:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Anne, thank you for the kind words.
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 9:14:00 AM

    It really is dark out there. I love, "midnight mural." Jack

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 4/28/2013 5:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. I think this was inspired by some of the rocker groups in the 60's. I always hated seeing people struggle through drug addictions
  1. Date: 4/27/2013 11:01:00 AM

    - Very skillfully written Karen - darkness can hide ..... - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey Date: 4/27/2013 11:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the review. I appreciate your comments very much.