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Haiku 42 - 1,2,3,4

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Haiku 42 - 1,2,3,4

			
		1
	a noiseless moment 
	he writes in his diary
	incessant snow  


		2
	every day he hoped   
	every day she avoided…  
	waning moon

		
		3
	his need for love 
	he opened his careless mouth 
	oak tree, splintered


		4
	words that she heard
	anger and bewilderment
	forest inferno

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 12:01:00 AM
    Well you haven't mentioned sunlight yet... that would top it off nicely :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 4/28/2013 9:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sorry... No sun in this one.
  1. Date: 4/27/2013 4:31:00 PM
    These are wonderful Jack....I hope it is a happy ending..guess I'll see...

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 4/28/2013 9:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm sorry... It didn't end happily... Jack
  1. Date: 4/27/2013 2:36:00 PM
    These are some of the best haiku I've read by you. I love that each one has a nature metaphor that so accurately describes the emotions happening in the first two lines. I, too, thought the second one was a bit more intense than the others, but each was special in their own way. Can't wait for the last installment :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 4/27/2013 3:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Tomorrow is it, but I'll bet you can guess the ending... Jack
  1. Date: 4/27/2013 9:15:00 AM
    Good morning Jack, the second one is my favorite. xox~Linda

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 4/27/2013 12:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Linda. Actually, they are four parts of a five-part relationship tale told in Haiku. The final segment is tomorrow. I think I'll attach a note about my intentions... Jack