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No Return

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No Return

It was not a dream
Moments before waking she heard herself weep
When she woke up, touched her cheek
With lump in her throat she felt her pillow
Damp with weeping sleep
Her being floating to the depth of despair
Feeling herself letting go 
The light a flicker of her past
Her body limp, slipping fast
As she head dived
Her core consumes, embracing the darkness
Feathers from her black wings
Floating above
As she free fall
Spiralling to the depth of nowhere
Into the abyss of her deep dark despair
Trapped within herself

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  1. Date: 4/27/2013 6:24:00 AM
    HAUNTINGLY BEAUTIFUL, DARK THOUGH STARK WITH AN INNER LIGHT YOUR BEING HAS TRANSCENDED AND YOUR SPIRIT RESIDES CLOSE TO THE ANGELS OF PARADISE, HAVE A BLESSED DAY MY DEAR AND MAY THE ANGELS HOVER OVER YOU ALWAYS, ROSE XXX Persian, your name is beauty itself xxx

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 8:22:00 PM
    Good Job... Liked it :-)

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    Date: 4/27/2013 5:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sonia Cepeda, thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment. :-)