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I JUST FOUND OUT

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I JUST FOUND OUT




I just found out how skin of day 
breathes in the grayness  of  Fall sky,
as moist  eyes fold to drop away
on moonlit puffs  that slowly die
like mirrors crashed into the air,
a splendor gliding down below,
while tradewinds' draft glides off somewhere
biting the night with sharpened jaw.

My fingers trace sweet memory
calling Jack’s name in every bloom
while angels restore the glory
of traces born from love’s heirloom;
I pause… his Light perches on trees
where we christened fire tasting rum,
and though wonder passes through leaves
the days will sift joys, dear husband.


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For Susan’s ‘ I Just Found Out’ Contest
*As narrated by my female cousin
after her spouse passed on*

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  1. Date: 5/8/2013 10:41:00 AM

    Congrats on your win ~A.O

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 3:17:00 AM

    Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 7:32:00 PM

    I am sure she loves it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 7:26:00 PM

    Congratulations you are always a winner to me...

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 1:15:00 PM

    I just found out that you are one of my favorite poets......You're unique, never chime in unnecessarily.....and I'm a fan...So thanks....

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 1:24:00 PM

    Wow, this is beautiful Nette! It's always a pleasure to read your work. :)

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 11:03:00 PM

    Very touching poem nette. Her sadness is heartfelt...Good luck Love Dalila

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 3:30:00 PM

    Nette, what hope and wonder from gray to light and love----so glad you're back, but most glad you're safe and well and sharing these poems!

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 12:12:00 PM

    Very touching poem by you here nette.Beautifully penned.

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 7:41:00 AM

    Oh my heart just paused a bit....

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 4:26:00 PM

    This is a tearful but also joyful experience my friend! You have brought a masterful piece of art to my heart with this incredible poem! What a glorious piece this poem truly is, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 12:42:00 PM

    Oh my..you made it straight into my heart with this beautiful poem dear Nette.Winning wishes in Susan`s contest dear friend..Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 11:40:00 AM

    This is a beautiful piece. Good luck on the contest.

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 11:31:00 AM

    Nette, you have done a good work for this contest - A poem which will win! - It's rare that I post for contest, I write most for the pleasure of writing and to others who want to read what I write. - Wishing you a lovely weekend Nette - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)