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The Storm

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The Storm

We lovers kissed as storm clouds rose and darkened early day,
Reunited again we held each other as storm winds made us sway.
Whispered winds swirled about as we lover’s sheltered true,
Softly caressing our bodies and blowing away the morning dew.
Slowly naked we did unpeel and pressed together in passions fire,
Kissing sweet and moving slow as lovers sing in personal choir.
Rain winds lap the cabin doors as if to condemn, defile, deplore,
As passion builds and cries aloud the storm outside rages more.
Beaded skins moved as one where words of love entwined our soul,
Enraging the storm it shook the world, two lovers lost within their role.
Gasped and teared, we clung to each other, till our bodies shake to rest.
The storms anger rages through and puts the cabins timbers to its test.
She leaves my side to meet the storm, naked, trembling, but with classic poise,
Opens the door and steps to meet the raging storm and its terrible noise.
It whips her body she cries aloud, claws her flesh and tugs her hair,
Yet stops as sudden and starts to cry its rain tears splash her skin so fair.
It gasps for breath at her beauty tall and brushes the hair from her eyes,
And leaves the world in silence now, except for its heart broken sighs.



Seosamh de Burca................. © 26th April 2013

Entered into Softly sensual contest

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  1. Date: 10/25/2013 8:01:00 AM
    Beautiful Seosamh; such beauty, pain, and ecstasy all trying to steal the same moment. Very nicely expressed.

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 11/5/2013 3:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for taking the time to read and write such a nice comment on my poem.
  1. Date: 5/30/2013 6:21:00 AM
    It's a beautiful write, Seosamh, congrats!!

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 5/30/2013 11:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your kind words and taking the time to read my poem.
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 2:36:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. AO

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 5/29/2013 6:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi and thank you for your warm wishes.
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 9:03:00 PM
    great write and win Seosamh....congrats

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 5/29/2013 8:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading and kind comment its greatly appreciated.
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 8:57:00 PM
    Seosamh. Congratulations, with your awesome poem. Goodnight~LINDA

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 5/29/2013 8:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda for your generous comment and taking the time to read my poem.
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 3:35:00 PM
    A most passionately described moment of pure fiery bliss. I was totally engulfed in your lascivious portrayal of two lovers. Exceptional! Love and hugs, Jack xoxoxox If I could, I would have given you a ten!

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 5/19/2013 2:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, thank you Jack for your very generous comment.
  1. Date: 5/13/2013 3:31:00 PM
    Well done great poem.

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 5/13/2013 5:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, thanks for reading and leaving such a generous comment.
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 9:59:00 AM
    A magnificent piece, full of passion, power and graphic imagery! BRAVO my friend!! Best wishes, Keith (PS thanks for your kind remarks on M.S.)

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 4/30/2013 4:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi and thank you for reading and leaving such nice comment. I enjoy reading your work.
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 8:06:00 PM
    Beautiful verse, xxx

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 4/30/2013 4:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi and thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 6:38:00 PM
    Where have you been hiding my friend??? As Donna said, this is TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!!!

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 4/30/2013 4:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jack for reading and your kind comment.
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 4:27:00 PM
    This is awesome....very professional....do you enter the contests by members??? If not you should..they are fun and you would be sure to place high in them...Donna

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 4/29/2013 12:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for your nice words of encouragement. I didnt think my poems would be of high enough standard to enter competitions but thank you for suggesting this. I have enjoyed reading your poems I have found them very uplifting. Thanks for reading my efforts, I really appreciate you taking the time.
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 9:31:00 AM
    Thank you Kim and Demetrios for reading and leaving positive comments on my poem. I really appreciate the feed back.

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 8:56:00 AM
    This is a truly poignet and beautifully written poem of passion. I could feel the storm.