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Haiku 42 - 1,2,3

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Haiku 42 - 1,2,3

	
		1
	a noiseless moment 
	he writes in his diary
	incessant snow  


		2
	every day he hoped   
	every day she avoided…  
	waning moon

		
		3
	his need for love 
	he opened his careless mouth 
	oak tree, splintered

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 5:32:00 PM

    Deep emotion complemented by great imagery! A wonderful read, thank you.

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 2:24:00 AM

    Clever write!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/27/2013 8:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Susan... Jack
  1. Date: 4/26/2013 5:32:00 PM

    Need I say more ! Wonderful set dear poet, and I truly enjoyed its lead ! Have a wonderful weekend Jack.....much love, james

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 11:36:00 AM

    Jack, I like all three ..... but, if I should choose one ..... was my selection: 3 - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 4/26/2013 1:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks... There are five in the series, the idea being to tell a story in haiku... Jack