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  1. Date: 8/11/2013 3:21:00 AM

    A nice win Betty, ..........SKAT

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 11:45:00 PM

    Betty, Congratulations in "Last Night I Dreamt ... contest :-)" xox~~~ Linda

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 9:44:00 AM

    Your poems amazing. :-) Congrats... love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 7:37:00 AM

    Om my, beautiful and so sad. congrats on your winning dream. BG

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 4:28:00 AM

    very poignant! congrats on your win...

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:52:00 PM

    Very moving, congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 8:17:00 PM

    congrats on your 5th place win Betty with this touching entry in the serious category

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 7:59:00 PM

    I love this one. I too lost a son and would love to have that dream. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 7:47:00 PM

    Betty, heartfelt....Congratulations, In DG's "Dream On" contest... ... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 6:31:00 PM

    So very sad! I fine connection with the sadness of Geppetto Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 6:57:00 AM

    So sensitive Betty and a well deserved placement for your write!

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 7:23:00 AM

    Dear Betty, As I read your beautiful poem, I continued to think about my sister who lost her son on April 1st one year ago. She has been distraught ever since the police knocked upon her door, informing her of the motorcycle accident. I would like to copy, paste and send your poem to her because I think it would help and she as a nurse is so very bad off.....Congratulations on your win....best, Judy

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 7:55:00 PM

    There is just a thin flimsy veil between this world and the next, and he rejoices when you smile and heal, xxx

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 7:54:00 PM

    Congrats Betty on your win xxx

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 5:15:00 PM

    Betty this gave me chills. I can relate to this poem. I also have a son that passed away. Beautifully written and heartfelt. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 10:52:00 PM

    Ouch! This is so sad ... Heartbreaking. What a strong emotion! Look at my eyes! Im going to fav this poem, Betty. My best wishes. Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 9:21:00 AM

    This is very touching, I let out a good cry after I read this. They say when someone passes away they become 30 years old. I don't if that's true or not, but you described here fit it that statement. I'm am so glad you got a chance to embrace him in your dreams. Dreams I believe are a doorway to a different plane. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 9:20:00 AM

    Dear Betty, I read your blog this morning. Would you like to share his name with me. I don't know why. Maybe it's because I am still grieving and the only image I have of my grandson Bael, is his sleeping little body. I know my daughter's heart is not in peace. But, we have talked about her son may visit her in a dream one day. We will await for this. She already mentioned his visit. I wonder if when he visits, he will be a grown little boy, we can hug too. I will share this poem with my daughter. I am very sad for your loss. In some ways I think you were meant for me to find you on the soup. God bless ~LINDA

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 9:01:00 AM

    Just beautiful Betty, I am so happy for you that you had this most precious dream. I haven't been able to dream about my wife and touch her which I so desperately want but I could only imagine how beautiful this must have been for you. I wish you more...Blessings and Hugs.