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My Sunrise

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My Sunrise

You are my sunrise everyday
And my Milky Way at Night
Heart thumping in our lovers way 
As doves take off in flight

Hand in hand we stroll the path
Created foot by foot
The ways we love just count the math
Our soul's a lover's flute

Like minds we are a song to sing
The melody so clear
Projecting light around a ring
To see what can come near

The life we choose will surely last
As long as God Commands
My dying days your hand stays fast
Love lasts like grains of sand

©2013 Rick Zablocki

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 12:45:00 AM

    a sweet and sunny lilting love poem!

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 1:43:00 PM

    Such a poignantly expressed poem. I loved your Milk Way descriptions... both beautiful in the day and night, staying strong through the good times and bad. Great message!

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 11:54:00 PM

    Nice one Rick loved your last 2 lines...Seren

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 6:54:00 PM

    Very nice poem Rick...and a romantic one too. Keep on the positve side and continue to enjoy life. Not everyone is so fortunate

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 6:26:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your creative work..Romantic indeed..It has good rhyme, rhythm, and flow to it..Thanks for stopping by your comments are appreciated...Sara

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 6:10:00 PM

    Nicely romantic Rick, whoever she be she must love this. Welcome back. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 10:12:00 AM

    wonderful poetry Rick, so profound, so heartfelt

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 5:53:00 AM

    Hello sir, the poem is a bit sad in the final part, "my dying days," makes me sad...