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Fall from Grace A Roundel

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Fall from Grace A Roundel

Before the beginning of time when Chaos ruled Hell and Night
Into the depths of this Cosmos, a Paradise, perfectly placed.
Above this darkness, a heaven drawn forth in a burst of light
Before the beginning of time

From the Garden of Eden, henceforth, Adam and Eve were disgraced
Lo!  A fallen angel  changed himself to a serpent in Eve’s sight
Banished, they fled before God to a wilderness, forever displaced.

Forbidden fruit had shown them the difference of wrong from right.
In Pandemonia,  Demons conspired, sin and death be interlaced.
God sacrificed his Son to save them  - from Hell's eternal plight.
Before the beginning of time

Suzanne Delaney

For Suzette Crous
Roundel Competition

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  1. Date: 5/14/2013 3:41:00 AM
    Well written pen. Full of biblical facts. Many congrats on your grand win in the challenge.

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 5:09:00 PM
    You did it extraordinarily well my dear friend Suz! I love this so much! MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved super win! I'll fave this one. Thank you so much for sharing and your heartfelt congratulations as well. Have a grace-filled day! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 11:42:00 AM
    I don't have a clue as to how to write a Roundel...This is flawlessly done. I was so spell-bound by the name 'Pandemonia' that I went on the internet to look it up to see if it was the actual name of a place and found no such name, which tells me it came straight from that mind of yours...Awesome - Tim

    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson
    Date: 5/13/2013 11:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Also, the personification of 'Chaos' - wow...
  1. Date: 5/11/2013 10:33:00 PM
    Suzanne, CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win. Take care and enjoy the blessings of today and tomorrow. LUV*LINDA

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 7:42:00 PM
    Congratulations on your big win Suzette, I enjoyed your exceptional verse xxx

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 4:20:00 PM
    Congratulations for taking top honors in Suzette's contest. Well done, Suz. :-)

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 2:18:00 PM
    Suz--fantastic, had to say I struggled with mine--this is a well deserved first!

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 12:51:00 PM
    Fabulous write and congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 9:10:00 AM

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 8:42:00 AM
    great write and win Suzanne.....big congrats

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 1:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on the FIRST PLACE win in my PARADISE LOST - ROUNDEL contest. This is an excellent poem on a difficult subject and roundel is not an easy poetry form. Please let me have your contact email for me to forward the prize, DANCE OF THE WORDS - A Guide to Various Poetry Forms, to you. Love, Su (The book is on its way - enjoy).

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 1:03:00 AM
    Congrats Suzanne ...Seren

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 4:06:00 PM
    Dear Xegrakio POETESS, S-N, S u Z, I had to look up Roundel, but I did not find the form. I see by the refrain "Before the beginning of time" that it is sort of a half Villanelle. Is the Pharse anything like "After the end of Eternity"?? I do not know Suzette that well so I wish YOU a Good Talent WIN.I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR S-P, Loyal Liege...HG Same P.S. as last comment. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER...Harry

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 7:58:00 AM
    This is really a charming write.... Good luck on the contest.... Thanks for stopping by~A.O

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 7:30:00 AM
    It gives new meaning to start the beginning with the end in mind. A wonderful tribute to our Amazing God and Savior.

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 7:42:00 PM
    Excellent poem Suzanne, you tried this, it should do very well in the contest.

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 5:23:00 PM
    I'm glad to see someone do that contest of Su's. I feel bad I have not even tried it yet! You did well, my friend. Great topic you chose for a roundel!

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 11:01:00 AM
    I like the repetative use of "Before the beginning of time" very nice

    Delaney Avatar Suzanne Delaney
    Date: 4/26/2013 11:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Christine This was a real challenge and took a lot of re-writes. Glad you like the refrain. Suz
    Delaney Avatar Suzanne Delaney
    Date: 4/26/2013 11:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Sara: Lovely to see you. Suz
  1. Date: 4/26/2013 5:16:00 AM
    Great work that speaks of your faith..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Sara