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  1. Date: 5/5/2013 5:45:00 PM
    Craig, your poem is what it is! CONGRATULATIONS ;-) Thank you for participating in my worst poem contest. I don't know if I should call this an honor, but it has been something different... It's always a pleasure running odd contest. Take Care~ LINDA

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 8:39:00 AM
    At 16 I related to climb beyond that wall....of my small I wouldn't live anywhere else....:-)

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 7:11:00 AM
    Craig....still confused...hahahaha....funny enough, this would have made perfect sense to me at 16! Seriously though, its actually pretty cool.

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 11:02:00 AM
    Even your "worst poem" is still pretty darn good, haha. Good luck in the contest. :)

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 7:14:00 PM
    Hey why do you think its so bad, [the pretty roses bloom so sweet, I have pink shoes upon my feet, now don't you think I'm really neat?Hear the birds go tweet, tweet, tweet] now that's bad, don't go belittling yourself for fun you're a fine poet! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 10:37:00 AM
    Very deep for a 16 year old to write. I see searching for answers to confusion in this.

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 12:31:00 AM
    Craig, I came into this late. I logged on, saw SO many different blogs about the "Raspberry" competition. I think it is a very fun idea. For me, the entire concept is a great platform for us to laugh at ourselves. I don't want people to take any of my possible input too seriously. I could show a list of absolutely stinky poetry that I have written. Hmmm -- actually, a chunk of that list is still posted here on PS lol.

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 12:29:00 AM
    Well, you wrote this when you were 16, and for me the ending justifies the overall poem ...."Clumps" is a far stronger contender. But even so, "Clumps" isn't a Raspberry contender compared to the poems written by Abdulhafeez Oyewole(the guy in PD's blog). If I could vote for anyone on PS(whether he/she was willingly partaking or not), I would give the Raspberry Award to: Kurtis Futch Jr.

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 6:12:00 PM
    This one ought to do good. I think it is worse than the two in your blog. So beautifully unconnected.

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 12:53:00 PM
    sometimes what we think is average can be very good... great nuggets found here!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 6:23:00 PM
    well, for the age you wrote it. it showed a glimmer of the promise of the marvelous poet you were to one day become!!

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 3:19:00 PM
    Good work for a sixteen year person..Enjoyed reading this evening..PD is going to like this one..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara