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Evolution Worst Poem

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Evolution Worst Poem

Incapable of sleep
My thoughts stray afar
A finer part missing
If only to decrease my anxiety
Music to cloud, ease into
The patterns of my mind
I know the realities
That evolve into my heart
I know the truths
that evolve
Into my state of mind
From once slumbering serenity
Now climb beyond that wall
The infinity beyond is fixed
So certain, so beautiful
To anticipate tomorrow's sun 
Pensive apprehension follows too near
Relief, my mind's defeats
Only breath beyond the infinite
Chambers of incomprehension
Behold! If only to free expression
As we only know is real truth
And see that day freed from
Societies ambiguously responsible 
Pages of report.


For PD's worst poem contest--be careful, you might need therapy after reading this!
Written when I was 16

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  1. Date: 5/5/2013 5:45:00 PM
    Craig, your poem is what it is! CONGRATULATIONS ;-) Thank you for participating in my worst poem contest. I don't know if I should call this an honor, but it has been something different... It's always a pleasure running odd contest. Take Care~ LINDA

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 8:39:00 AM
    At 16 I related to climb beyond that wall....of my small town...now I wouldn't live anywhere else....:-)

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 7:11:00 AM
    Craig....still confused...hahahaha....funny enough, this would have made perfect sense to me at 16! Seriously though, its actually pretty cool.

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 11:02:00 AM
    Even your "worst poem" is still pretty darn good, haha. Good luck in the contest. :)

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 7:14:00 PM
    Hey why do you think its so bad, [the pretty roses bloom so sweet, I have pink shoes upon my feet, now don't you think I'm really neat?Hear the birds go tweet, tweet, tweet] now that's bad, don't go belittling yourself for fun you're a fine poet! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 10:37:00 AM
    Very deep for a 16 year old to write. I see searching for answers to confusion in this.

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 12:31:00 AM
    Craig, I came into this late. I logged on, saw SO many different blogs about the "Raspberry" competition. I think it is a very fun idea. For me, the entire concept is a great platform for us to laugh at ourselves. I don't want people to take any of my possible input too seriously. I could show a list of absolutely stinky poetry that I have written. Hmmm -- actually, a chunk of that list is still posted here on PS lol.

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 12:29:00 AM
    Well, you wrote this when you were 16, and for me the ending justifies the overall poem ...."Clumps" is a far stronger contender. But even so, "Clumps" isn't a Raspberry contender compared to the poems written by Abdulhafeez Oyewole(the guy in PD's blog). If I could vote for anyone on PS(whether he/she was willingly partaking or not), I would give the Raspberry Award to: Kurtis Futch Jr.

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 6:12:00 PM
    This one ought to do good. I think it is worse than the two in your blog. So beautifully unconnected.

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 12:53:00 PM
    sometimes what we think is average can be very good... great nuggets found here!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 6:23:00 PM
    well, for the age you wrote it. it showed a glimmer of the promise of the marvelous poet you were to one day become!!

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 3:19:00 PM
    Good work for a sixteen year person..Enjoyed reading this evening..PD is going to like this one..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara