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  1. Date: 1/8/2014 3:01:00 PM
    I agree with Chan Caleb; it is wonderful in its symbolic state. I especially love the last three lines. A person cannot take your soul yet they take the words that are the essence of your soul all of the time...of course that is my understanding. I really like it.

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 1/8/2014 3:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    its been so long I had forgotten I had poetry on I wouldn't even know the log-ins now lol.
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 7:33:00 AM
    I don't see why you entered this in a "worst poem" contest; I very much enjoyed the simplicity of the piece. Much is to be said of "brevity"- when a poet can pack a great deal of meaning in so few words. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece; kudos to you, Caleb :)

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 5:34:00 PM
    This is very nice,,,, I used to post on back then too ;}

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 1/8/2014 3:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol been there too Debbie.
  1. Date: 5/6/2013 10:45:00 AM
    Hey man I think you should got first and it's all still competition. Good Job man!

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 5:52:00 PM
    Sorry sweet Caleb, your poem was bad,, but not that bad.. I found meaning in it.. sorry you did not make the top 10...CONGRATULATIONS ;-) Thank you for participating in my worst poem contest. I don't know if I should call this an honor, but it has been something different... It's always a pleasure running odd contest. Take Care~ LINDA

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 10:44:00 PM LIKE IT! So, don't think you're going to win. Please...stick with the quest for buggers one! That has a real chance...just on the subject matter cause the writing is GREAT!

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 10:13:00 AM
    Caleb, you certainly shouldn't feel any shame about your "worst poem"-- if you saw the first poem I wrote, you would definitely feel amazing about this one haha. By the way, thank you for the compliment about my avatar, I will admit- you flatter me! ;)

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 9:06:00 AM
    You may be a little too critical of this. It obviously has great worth as it kept you on the path. ANything written 15 years ago is quite deserving of a badge of honor

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 2:46:00 PM
    I admit it's a little confusing (the last two lines seems almost a contradiction... haha). But I have written worse I believe, it's fun to look at the older works and see how far we've come :) I'd say good luck on the contest... but do you really want to have the reward for "worst poem"? LOL...

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 11:37:00 AM
    If this is your worst poem, then I think you're in pretty good shape haha. I wouldn't say it's bad at all, just written by a younger, more naive version of you. It's actually really endearing to read, I think!

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 4:19:00 AM
    *blush* I really like it... :S

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 4/26/2013 4:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Always, Laura
  1. Date: 4/26/2013 1:56:00 AM
    Caleb.. while reading this.. and I read it three time, I thought how clever and actually quite profound the words were. The format flowed so well, I am considering trying the style myself. A famous poet once told me.. "Never, Ever critic your own poems, and never.. ever let others do it".. Every group of words we assemble emotively are creative art x

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 6:07:00 PM
    actually, Caleb this is not so terrible. I have seen much worse, right here and they are winning contests too! I will say that the final line of this one, however, is atrocious. hahaha. So glad to get to see a post from you, now lets see a new poem. (and I still love the bugger poem)

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 1:41:00 PM
    lol Caleb, you reminded me, now this has issues but I'm (with your prompt) going to enter one.

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 8:06:00 AM
    Regarding what's above well at least you write! And you keep writing! HUGS[Thanks so much Caleb for the 'epic' comment on Madness Rides, I felt I channeled Van Gogh but the write has never got a first place and it's beyond me? Perhaps you can tell me why?] Light & Love