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Leak

          L	  E	   A	    K

                   And
	      you  fixed
              its    shaft
 for  how   many  times  now?
Would   this   be    the    last?
                   	     
                          Sedating me
		          with       that

			        

                                 old
		              familiar
                  	    distinctive
		        tread             of 
	                your    absence,
		         a               tear
		            escaped.
    		           

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  1. Date: 5/19/2013 1:51:00 PM
    Greg, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Take Care *Linda

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 12:31:00 PM
    "Sedating me...with your absence." Love it. Like your style and your imagination. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 8:03:00 PM
    Greg, ;-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 9:02:00 AM
    about your poem: I feel tissues coming on. A very fine and sad elegy, this has been a very interesting poem to read this morning....xox~Linda

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 9:00:00 AM
    Good morning, Greg "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"