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FRIEND IN PRIDE AND PEACE

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FRIEND IN PRIDE AND PEACE


It must have been March when we both strayed
But then, I refused to warm fire’s glow
When bitter words raged and scarred my eyes;
Though pleading sorry, I shunned Kate’s hello.

Yet at nights when laughter used to bubble
I knew my gall of pride kept us apart
And missed our years graced by friendship’s bliss,
Surviving rain and daylight of love’s heart.

Ringing her door to offer sincere peace
My bones ripped like tiny splinters of hay;
She had left far off, my amends too late
Choking from void, on my birthday.



Belle Lucas' What A Friend Really Is Contest
25 April 2013
*I hope Kate and I will make up soon.

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  1. Date: 5/30/2013 9:08:00 AM

    Nette....a poem with weight upon each line....nice, jimbo

  1. Date: 5/4/2013 12:37:00 PM

    Congratulations for your win, and good luck with your friend. Its sad that you miss her, and maybe she doesn't. Hope for the best. Terry xoxo

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 6:34:00 PM

    Nette, CONGRATULATIONS... friendship can be a very sweet feeling.. love your meaning.... :-) *LINDA

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 11:11:00 PM

    Congrats on your win. ~A.O

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 9:54:00 PM

    True friends share pain too..love will conquer...congratulations

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 8:23:00 PM

    Nice to find you here Nette. I hope it is not too late to mend your friendship. Congratulations. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 8:14:00 PM

    I hope you do as well. I have a friend who was my best friend that I continue to try and connect 20 years later. You never know.

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 8:47:00 PM

    Just wonderful Nette!A great poem by you here.ovely read.

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 8:02:00 PM

    Always the conflict, love and pride. Who can't identify with this one? So lovely, REAL. Splinters of hay, loved this. That shivery, I'll-blow-away feeling, almost combustible, yes, I get this! Hope this places high! :)

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 5:07:00 PM

    Nette, I really like this one. At first I almost believed it was a sonnet I was reading. It's sweet and lyrical. So this is your best friend maybe? Hope you two can make up.

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 3:22:00 PM

    Such a heartfelt poem dear poet ! I hope that your desire is found my friend ! Have a wonderful day Nette....much love, james

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 11:04:00 AM

    Hi, my dear friend Nette! This is a sad poem about a friend. Hope you will make up soon with her. A great write as always! Thank you so much for sharing and your nice comments on my latest poem. I'm going home this Sat. Can you give me your phone number just in case I can go to Mla.? And, please tell me how can we meet just in case ok? And, is your name the same here? Mine, as it is ;))) Thank you so much! Bigsweet hugs! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 8:15:00 AM

    If they value you, they'll return. If you value them, they'll stay. This is a very emotionally gripping piece.

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 5:59:00 AM

    Wow, that is a sad occurrence my friend! I've had some friends that through distance we have fallen apart and I still miss their presence, so I know the heavy feeling you express within this poem! I could feel your deep sadness and your desire to make up with your friend! I loved reading this amazing and outstanding poem this morning! What a masterful piece, Great work!!

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 1:38:00 AM

    - So sad Nette, beautifully written. - My day has just begun ..... enjoying my morning coffee - Good luck in the contest! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) - # (Show me your face) #

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 1:34:00 AM

    AWESOME!! a departure from your signature style...but brilliant just the same... Great to see your Brilliance in print again my friend!