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Awesome Summer

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Awesome Summer

I'm yearning for break
Summer's the time of my life
Awesome! School ends soon

I'm hoping for break
Summer's the best time to swim
Let's go to the beach! 

I'm waiting for school
To come to an end at last
We all need time off! 

We all yearn for an 

Awesome summer

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 1:09:00 AM
    I remember my school days and how I longed for that last day of school so I could start summer. ENJOY the one coming up.

    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 4/28/2013 12:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hahah! :P me too! Back at Elementary school and Middle School =) I always looked forward to summertime and when it arrived, I got bored after a while. Thankx! You too - have a grand one yourself!
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 1:44:00 AM
    - Yes, I think all school students look forward to summer vacation - No alarm clock! Have fun in your holiday David! - A nice poem to read! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 6:45:00 PM
    Have an awesome summer...:-)

    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 4/24/2013 6:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you too!! :DD Thank you, Donna! Have fun spending time with family and suchness xD ~~~~~~~~~~~~DWB