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Such felicity to tip toe
On  thin ridge
Delivering  a premise

Such strain in the chest
To pour over a love-chest 

Heart sluggish or fast or missing 
A beat , the ancient treadmill

A woodpecker bores 
Deep into a collage
An origami of conversations

Which way you look
The only way back in the day, 
Of senescence,
Metamorphosed   since 

For a racy glide painless 
For plain or phantom rides.

23 Apr 2013
Form: Freeverse.

For Nathan's contest.

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  1. Date: 5/21/2013 2:35:00 PM
    congrats jaggy, 4th is a great place to be (I say that bc I placed 4th in the last two contests lol) :)

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:19:00 PM
    Jag, Congratulations.... enjoyed stopping by tonight ~LINDA

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 4:18:00 PM
    Jag, these verses seem almost like a series of haikus, wonderful, unexpected juxtpositions of words, which somehow make sense anyway. Fine job!

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:43:00 AM
    Wonderful and thank you Jag, please read my blog.

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 9:52:00 PM
    A very fine poem Jag, good luck in the contest...LINDA

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 10:50:00 AM
    Wow Jag this is amazing poetry...

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 2:50:00 PM
    i love it so much. beautiful imagery and descriptions

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 9:02:00 AM
    Good piece... Best wishes~A.O

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 2:22:00 AM
    Nice one!

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 4:57:00 PM
    I agree with the comment below, it is an amazing poem, I think I get most of the metaphors, but your images and metaphors are sooo deep and profound, even for the line "an origami of conversations" btw! x :) c

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 11:23:00 AM
    wow.... this fine write is so distinct in substance and flow, dear jag...i'm simply amazed!... :) huggs!

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 2:08:00 AM
    Jag, the thought is deep and well done in this poem! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 7:04:00 PM
    Well said Jag.....I started out on one of these...