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Walking Domino

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Walking Domino

black cows walking by
field covered with snow today
walking domino



©Donna Jones

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  1. Date: 5/21/2013 10:45:00 PM
    hey this is pretty cool. Great image.

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 2:48:00 PM
    Awesome analogy Donna - J.A.B. %

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/18/2013 8:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :-) thanks
  1. Date: 5/2/2013 9:48:00 PM
    Nice use of the 5 7 5 form. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/3/2013 5:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Matthew..only my second attempt at this form...still working on it...
  1. Date: 5/2/2013 7:01:00 PM
    I think I seen the shadow of this cow once, pretty swift for a big fellow! Haiku is addicting, nice job!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/2/2013 7:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks timothy....
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 12:16:00 AM
    Haha... very unique description! Hope some redneck doesn't ractice his cow-tipping skills - then we'd really see how the dominoes fall! Lol...

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/2/2013 7:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yeah...a few would appear to be missing their black dots!!!!! Haha thanks Timothy...
  1. Date: 4/27/2013 6:30:00 PM
    Humorous and clever write! Well done! Love, Hanitra

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/27/2013 9:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Hanitra....:-)
  1. Date: 4/27/2013 4:45:00 PM
    Really good. Nice visuals... Jack

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/27/2013 9:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jack...just outside my front door a few yards...now they graze on green grass after the snow..still a pretty picture every day...
  1. Date: 4/26/2013 7:19:00 AM
    Love it dear Donna! A few simple words create such a serene winter scene! Love ya! Hugs, Jack xoxoxox

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/26/2013 9:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jack....walking cheeseburgers too....
  1. Date: 4/26/2013 12:02:00 AM
    This one made me smile. Good night Donna

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/26/2013 9:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Richard....
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 8:37:00 PM
    Very good haiku here Donna!Enjoyed the read.Thanks for visiting my pages.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/26/2013 9:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Appreciate that...Kash. always...my pleasure....
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 4:58:00 PM
    I love the white/black contrast imagery of your haiku, Donna.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/26/2013 9:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Always love your input and advise Andrea....thanks....
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 3:46:00 PM
    Unique and creative work in this one.Enjoyed reading it..I got a chuckle when reading it..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by with your encouraging comments..Sara

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/26/2013 9:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sara....likewise the encouragement...hope you have a good weekend...
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 9:46:00 AM
    This is a very fascinating write/haiku you've penned my dear friend Donna. I love it & I enjoyed so much. Thanks a lot for sharing and the smiles;)). A winner for me. Thank you so much also for your precious time stopping by on my poem leaving me a nice comment. I'm so honored.;)) Have a great & wonderful day! love lots, Leonora

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/26/2013 9:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You always make me smile Leonora ..thanks...
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 7:15:00 AM
    Donna great image in your Haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/26/2013 9:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Connie....
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 1:46:00 AM
    Well done Donna ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/25/2013 6:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Anne Lise ..thanks :-)
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 9:12:00 PM
    Donna....I love this! You are the master of haiku! How absolutely delightful! Hugs!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/24/2013 9:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Eileen...still practicing....I find these very challenging...
    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/24/2013 9:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you rose...as well...:-)
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 8:16:00 PM
    I like the picture this portrays, I have a great image in mind and it brings a smile, thanks for sharing this Donna, and thank you for all your kind comments on my page, much appreciated, have a great evening, xxx

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/24/2013 9:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rose as well
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 7:20:00 PM
    black cows on white field, nice comparison, Donna!! Jag

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/24/2013 9:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jag...:-)
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 7:03:00 PM
    nice haiku Donna....best wishes

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/24/2013 9:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Appreciate it Joseph...where are you headed in this nice ship??? Selling tickets????
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 4:35:00 PM
    Have you ever played dominoes? Supposedly it's a fun game, and takes a lot of strategy to play...and I STINK at it! Needless to say I don't play it anymore, ha ha! Oh right, your poem...I really loved it, it made me think of playing dominoes! I do love those cows, and on a white field that must have been striking! You have written a lovely piece my friend, a very enlightening write, Great Work!!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 4/24/2013 5:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes Russell I love to play..you can now get color coded ones..but that is cheating haha ...my neighbor has a whole field full of cows not fifty yards from me...on about eighty acres...I love watching them graze...thanks for stopping