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TRYING TO SLEEP

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TRYING TO SLEEP

Everyone is sleeping, but am not..
Room is full of silence, & weather is hot.
I have closed my eyes,as dreaming deep..
 But am not lost in thoughts, just trying to sleep.
Its 3 at night, n everythings dark..
But am willing to go outside n walk in a park.	
Willing to feel cool air & breathe long..
Looking at the time, I realize, its wrong.
What if I call someone at this time..
No, anyone will think, am not fine.
I should have not sleep in evening like that..
5 hours, I have already slept.. now feeling bad.
 I know time is not right..
But attempting a sleep, am texting friends, GOOD NIGHT.

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  1. Date: 8/8/2013 12:31:00 PM
    Glad you don't have my number you might wake me up LOL! Good poem describing a very frustrating and relatable feeling. MC

  1. Date: 5/4/2013 8:44:00 AM
    yeah i know that feeling too.really nice write.

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 10:34:00 PM
    Hahahah! U 'd have taken a sleeping pill....!

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 8:11:00 AM
    Lovely poem written here..regards INK-U-SCRIPT :)

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 4:11:00 AM
    - I know that feeling well ...... Welcome to P-Soup, you write very well. - (Giving and receiving) Visit other poems and give your comment - and you'll get back. - Continue with your beautiful poem. - Have fun with words and thoughts. - Good luck. - See you again. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 10:40:00 PM
    Sadhana, Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:58:00 PM
    this is me, always having a hard time sleeping. LOL, I should be asleep right now, But I'm too busy multitasking. I'm on the soup, and texting everyone goodnight. Sadhana"Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 8:50:00 PM
    I feel this way all the time. Insomnia is everywhere. I have done these things so many times.

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 12:12:00 PM
    thnxxxxxxxx a lotttttt catie n kim..

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 11:20:00 AM
    cute poem! :) when I lie down to nap in the afternoon, I often stay awake late at night. I enjoy using this time to write. Lovely poem, hope you've got some rest. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 8:52:00 AM
    I know how that feels--insomnia--especially in the heat. Great use of desciptive rhyme. Welcome to P/Soup