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  1. Date: 4/23/2013 1:45:00 PM
    Not too much when Harry met whatsername---but YES YES YES!! Pang of thorns kneads in the double loops of his mind--choked night--roller of throats--dripping, dangling eyes--more metaphor than most use in 10 poems and top it off with the circus in the meadow catch! Love it!

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 8:14:00 AM
    This is what happens when the saying "Fake it, 'til you make it", backfires. Extremely intense, but sad. A wonderful job!

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 7:49:00 AM
    Hi Nette!!:-) You have a winner here my dear friend.Just to see you back again makes my world so much happier:) I`ll be back later on With a comment when I have better time.Hugs and Love flying Your way!

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 4:31:00 PM
    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 3:36:00 PM
    Thank you Nette, for the sweet hello... i like this poem, sad imagery...... very sad... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 3:05:00 PM
    Wow the power behind your words, you seemed to have painted a brilliant world here! I am amazed as always at what you write, you always surprise me with your skill! This is an extremely fabulous piece my friend, Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 2:37:00 PM
    You are back! :-D Glad to see your face on the wall again. Nice lines. Love, Su

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 1:25:00 PM
    Very nice... good luck in the contest... Terry

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 12:49:00 PM
    Well written Nette - Luck in contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)