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Tanka 6

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Below is the poem entitled Tanka 6 which was written by poet Timothy Hicks. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Tanka 6

heads down,
a boy and girl both walking
almost collide -
unaware they're
texting each other

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  1. Date: 4/23/2013 8:27:00 AM
    fav poem and fav poet. keep writing tankas like this! the ones about people are awesome!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 4/23/2013 11:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow, Susan. That means more than you know, to me! It's an indescribable feeling to gain fans :D
  1. Date: 4/23/2013 7:52:00 AM
    This is so good!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 4/23/2013 11:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Richard.
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 4:39:00 PM
    Ha ha, this is oh so true in today's world! I love the cleverness and awesome humor within this wondrous poem, Great Work!!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 4/22/2013 6:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you could get a kick out of it, Russ...
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 3:24:00 PM
    hahahaha. LOVE what this says about our society . A FAVE

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 4/22/2013 6:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    What an honor Andrea! Thanks :)
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 2:04:00 PM
    ha! this is so indicative of kids these days! technology rules, lol. love it!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 4/22/2013 6:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I got addicted myself when I got my first cellphone. The addiction last long, however. Thanks for reading me once more!