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YOUR PROMISE

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YOUR PROMISE

YOUR PROMISE


Your promise of being
Together, 
Filled my heart with an 
Optimistic breeze, 
Causing  
The lingering there fears, to 
Take flight 
Into 
The night of oblivion
And 
To forever disappear!

© Demetrios Trifiatis
    22 APRIL 2013

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  1. Date: 4/23/2013 11:47:00 AM
    Beauty of passion adorned nicely without any doubt. Sometimes happen to many and tears of passion lingers unknowingly unexpectedly. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 11:54:00 PM
    Captivating metaphors, I enjoyed this one.

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 9:35:00 AM
    Good morning Demetrios, and a super wow.... never have I meet a person who did not send my heart to oblivion. if I haven't Favorited one of your poems already, this one surely impressed me the most, so far. I am struck with the imagery of all promises falling into the water. always~ Linda

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 8:23:00 AM
    I like this very much. A promise that sometimes we don't keep. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 6:03:00 AM
    I feel this way whenever I'm with my wife my friend! You have painted a beautiful and illustrious picture, one that I was able to easily visualize! I truly loved reading this amazing poem this morning! Such a fabulous piece, Great Work!!