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Sandy

 
Sandy:
 
Tree’s on cars , tree’s on the street.
We all were told to stay or retreat.
All we could do was hope and pray,
that our homes were afloat when we returned the next day
Broken glass, and broken fences.
How could sandy hit us, when we are so defenseless?
Everyone took sandy as a joke and a fake
when reality struck we realized that was a big mistake.

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  1. Date: 5/3/2013 8:09:00 AM
    Wow,beautiful. Great poem

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 10:34:00 PM
    Bria, Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 1:55:00 PM
    Very nice piece well written

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 9:02:00 AM
    Good morning Bria, "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 8:32:00 AM
    Jersey shore may never be the same. I'm a Jersey native and it pains me to see what happened there. Well done on this writing!

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 5:03:00 AM
    Thank you for your well written poem Bria. - Welcome to P-Soup! - Have fun with writing, reading and comments with us. - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)