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LOVE-a sinful fruit

Love, some say is a sinful fruit,
for others its a blissful truth.

Addictive it is way mor than marijuana and cocaine,
but lose it, it will give you way more pain.

Those who have lost it, has felt that pain,
their life is never gonna be the same again.

I am new to the feeling of love,
and i feel as peaceful as a dove.

Greats say "love is not times fool",
but to not enjoy the bliss of love time is a fool.

Love,some say is a sinful fruit,
for others its still is a blissful truth.

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  1. Date: 11/2/2013 9:44:00 PM

    that was beautiful :) very nice job

    pratap Avatar vinayak pratap Date: 11/4/2013 12:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you rose for your nice comment. ~V~
  1. Date: 9/26/2013 9:28:00 PM

    this is a very good poem that I enjoyed reading. you ended it perfectly.

    pratap Avatar vinayak pratap Date: 9/27/2013 4:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you wayne for your supporting review
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 7:08:00 PM

    Vinayak, , CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**

    pratap Avatar vinayak pratap Date: 9/28/2013 3:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Linda
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 3:28:00 PM

    Vinayak, lovely poem to have featured, very true statements about love.

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 10:33:00 PM

    Vinayak , Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 8:59:00 AM

    Stopping by again, Vinayak , "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"

    A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/22/2013 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I read this poem yesterday,-- came back to welcome you to the soup... PD
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 5:05:00 AM

    Thank you for your well written poem Vinayak. - Welcome to P-Soup! - Have fun with writing, reading and comments with us. - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 10:59:00 PM

    Hello Vinayak, this is sweet and lovely... like the sinful fruit we say it is... love how you compare the addiction... always~ Linda