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  1. Date: 7/29/2014 2:13:00 PM
    Craig, Congratulations, in Andrea's "Let's Get Technical contest:)" Loving life's how it goes.... LINDA

  1. Date: 7/28/2014 1:30:00 PM
    Craig, beautiful sonnet that left me feeling just a little sad because of the truth it contains. Love to read your work. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 7/28/2014 7:52:00 AM
    Awesome write Craig ! Sonnets I find r very hard to write,, i m not very gud at rhyming ,, u really hv a great pen ! Congrats on huge win!

  1. Date: 7/27/2014 5:33:00 PM
    Ahh! If we would always stay the knight and the damsel and enjoy the simpler things.. love this my friend.. Congrats on a great win.. Hugs.. Arlene

  1. Date: 7/27/2014 12:36:00 PM
    Craig, this is an example of a poem I truly loved but it just had a few little punctuation things. I am someone who loves writing sonnets more than I do reading them, but honestly, this is one I adored reading. The meaning of it and the imagery was JUST my cup of tea. Congrats in my contest.

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 6:10:00 AM
    A good sonnet--a "love" poem, but not exactly. A good comment on human hypocrisy. I would like to use this one in the current text if you would so permit.

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    Date: 1/4/2014 8:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You may use any Karen, it's an honor!
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 6:00:00 PM
    Craig, Congratulations :-) In Debbie's "Metamorph" contest. always~ PD

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 1:57:00 PM
    Very descriptive and creative work that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 12:13:00 AM
    Congrats on your brilliant win Craig~A.O

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 6:57:00 PM
    Craigh this is really completing each other, My favorite lines are the last two, those are spectacular closing :D wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 4:23:00 PM
    Together they felt like one poem. Very well done Craig. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 3:41:00 PM
    OH yeah, that's the way to a sow's ear into a silk purse, you are so smart, since I already had critiqued the 3 liner just keep poking me all you want! Prodded with sonnets is so romantic ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 1:57:00 PM
    Awesome re-write, Craig! I always love your sonnets, and this might be my favourite of yours so far! Congratulatons :) (And thanks for the comment about your contest - I went ahead and entered it!)

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 1:49:00 PM
    Congrats Craig So much hiding in that Haiku. An interesting metamorphosis.

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 11:51:00 AM
    congrats on a fine win Craig

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 10:57:00 AM
    Oh WOW Craig, love it congratulations, yes so may lies in this life. Its so good to see you everywhere. Terry xo

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 10:11:00 AM
    Many congratulations Craig , well done sonnets are becoming my favorite form xx

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 9:24:00 AM
    This poem evolved into a wonderful sonnet.......I feel damp from the misty waters, as I read this metamorph!!Great poems each one!!

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 9:01:00 AM
    Love the couplet best. Congrats on your win, Craig. Love, Su

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 2:44:00 PM
    i too love the imagery and the the visual aspects craig,, also Otters are one of my favourite animals...