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Out the Window

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Out the Window

The house is perfect for the autumn days With the windows built just for the sunlight Beautiful feel brought by the morning haze Letting light in, letting things be real bright With the windows built just for the sunlight Looking out the window you see beyond Letting light in, letting things be real bright You can see out there a nice little pond Looking out the window you see beyond There’s a pathway that leads into the yard You can see out there a nice little pond Seeing and not being out there is hard There’s a pathway that leads into the yard It’s a tender sight that I am seeing Seeing and not being out there is hard Opening my heart, this is sure pleasing It’s a tender sight that I am seeing Beautiful feel brought by the morning haze Opening my heart, this is sure pleasing The house is perfect for the autumn days
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  1. Date: 4/22/2013 11:44:00 PM

    "It's a tender sight that I am seeing" << This line just really jived well with me. The flow of it was just perfect. Pantoums are really fun to write in, but it's a bit of trick to get the hang of. Really great work here! I wanna see for myself, the place you're describing :)

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 9:37:00 AM

    Very descriptive work..That house sounds just perfect..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the visits..Sara

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 5:46:00 AM

    Glad you liked Jackie's singing, I think she's amazing, xxx

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 7:16:00 PM

    Such beautiful eyes such as yours don't miss the beauty of the world at large, such a gift from our Father is priceless Russell, like to share a link with you, have a listen to a song entitled: To Believe by Jackie Evancho, I wanted to send you the link, but I can't see please have a listen, let me know what you think?

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 5:33:00 PM

    Russell; I love the picture you painted for us from your window, but why can't you go out there and be by the pond? Thanks for the visit. Many blessings....... Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 5:06:00 PM

    just love this one, Russell

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 2:49:00 PM

    and soupy mail for you!..:)

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 2:06:00 PM

    picturesque scene with words that entice , my friend... i like the gentle flow of this piece.. just awesome!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 10:46:00 AM

    This poem is perfect for Autumn days as well Russell. A very breathtaking view you so brilliantly decorated within your words and lines. Wishing you a great Sunday. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 8:13:00 AM

    Another excellent poem written for the occasion! Thank you!