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A Naughty Twist to an Old Rhyme

Eileen Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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A Naughty Twist to an Old Rhyme

The Build UP

One two…I want you
Three four...Kiss me more
Five six…tasty licks
Seven eight…I can’t wait
Nine ten…Come again!

The Cool Down? ;)

Ten, nine…that was fine
Eight, seven…still in heaven
Six, five….I feel alive
Four, three…more for me
Two, one…I’m undone!

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 4/22/2013 11:34:00 AM
    Ha ha ha!

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 4/22/2013 9:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ;) :) ;)
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 7:39:00 AM
    Eileen!...calm down now...haha.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 4/22/2013 7:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ;) Ok....will try! Life is just so tough for passionate people! Grrrrrrrrr!
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 9:49:00 PM
    You never fail to amaze me!!!!! Now this tune is stuck in my head!!!!

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 4/22/2013 7:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hee Hee! Well..memorize it! It might get you more attention than the other one! ;)
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 3:05:00 PM
    I love this Auntie, great twist, and it eases my anxiety for one I'll soon be posting lol. Take care, Richard

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 4/22/2013 7:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    RICHARD!!!! You gone and done something I won't approve???? Been checking since....hurry up!
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 8:49:00 AM
    Come again? You naughty person, you... LOL! I'll never think of this rhyme the same way again...

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 4/22/2013 7:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HA HA HA HA HA! Somehow couldn't work around the BIG FAT HEN! ;) I'm naughty, but nice! ;)
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 8:09:00 AM
    Cute!

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 4/22/2013 7:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    and sweet? ;)