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In the Meadow

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In the Meadow

Two travelers with different destinations, we met before our paths diverged, and in that span between our first encounter and subsequent farewell, we read in one another’s eyes a wanderlust that took us off our track. We found ourselves in a meadow of grass seemingly never trodden on before, where we became as two breezy joyous children, frolicking dizzily around the wildflowers that became our world. Racing each other up a knoll, we finally and breathlessly tumbled into one another’s arms, growing silent as we gazed into each other’s eyes beneath a sky of blue. Rapture soon discovered us that glorious day in the meadow. . . Later, a nearby river enticed us with its rushing sound, so we followed it. Coming to its end, we saw the sky grow black and tried to find our way back to our first spot of discovery and enchantment. Instead we wound up back on the common path where we’d first met, parting ways as a sudden rain’s downpour veiled my view of your departure. Every now and then I stop and wonder if you ever came across a place again that could compare to the rapture of our time in the meadow.

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  1. Date: 7/5/2013 5:10:00 AM
    What a breathtaking poetic description of a scenery!Absolutely awesome, Andrea.

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 6:32:00 PM
    Very descriptive work..Wonderful scene in a meadow that you have panned..If this is for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 6:26:00 AM
    You can't learn to write like this. - Red

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:24:00 PM
    Absolutely beautifu, Andrea. Yes! I am alive and well - just dropping in to day hello. Elaine

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 7:53:00 AM
    Andrea; This is so beautiful. It's nice to have memories like this, by the meadow. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 7:28:00 AM
    WOW!!! I shouldn't be surprised that you are so darned good at writing prose, but this is beautiful. That first sentence is absolutely golden!

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 4:49:00 PM
    Such a nice reminicence of youthful love and joy. It's as if your words themselves are frolicking in the meadow. :)

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 8:35:00 AM
    WOW! you pulled me right in with this Andrea. this can be compared to many beautiful moments in our lives that bring us back and make us wonder. Beautiful imagery!

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 7:54:00 AM
    Ah, some prose from you for a change. This prose poetry read to me like snap-shots from a dream -- cool effect. Thank you kindly for the fav poems "contest" invite, even though I haven't been entering contests for quite some time. Hey, if you at least enjoy my more humorous and bawdy 'shorties', that's good enough for me, without entering. I am being stubborn about the contests.

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 6:36:00 AM
    Lord have mercy....that's good...very magical, like part of a fairy-tale!

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 6:02:00 PM
    Ah yes, I remember it well lol. Sorry Petal could'nt resist. This is a beautiful write, with your usual touch. Love the misty departure, adds surreal to your story. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 2:23:00 PM
    WOW. Love the elegant descriptive quality of this unique fleeting affair

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 1:48:00 PM
    Beautiful!

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 1:47:00 PM
    sounds like a fun day ;) good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 1:37:00 PM
    And soup mail, too.

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 1:21:00 PM
    I think that must have been sweetmeadow grass Andrea this is quite an attention grabbing write full marks indeed.." and a few extra)) also soup mail by the way..' Joe..)

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 12:47:00 PM
    Hey Andrea. Yep, I lived in Kentucky for about eleven years starting when I was about seventeen. It has a special place in my heart as well, although I have yet to encounter any blue grass there.. Great write, I love the Robert Frost-y hints at the beginning..was that intentional? Have a lovely Sunday.

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 11:01:00 AM
    This is a nice prose ;}

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 7:10:00 AM
    I can capture in my imagination the very exciting moments in this wonderful place painted by your beautiful words my dear friend Andrea. It's a stellar write indeed! Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time stopping by leaving me your inspiring comments. Have a great day and good luck always! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 6:21:00 AM
    Wow! I like this one lots. Thank you for youe comments on my work.

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