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  1. Date: 10/1/2013 8:16:00 PM

    well done, ............. LUV.............. SKAT

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 9:35:00 AM

    This is a very touching great poem which I love to read tonight my dear friend Betty! Thank you so much for sharing and my big hearty congratulations on your super win! love lots & big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 7:48:00 PM

    and yet this is another one that tugs at the reader's heart strings...wow...powerful words...congrats on your win....hugs

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:39:00 PM

    Hi Betty, this is a very touching subject. Many will read this and relate to this kind of abuse or other forms of abuse. God, bless us all, especially the one's who found the strength in knowing we are not alone..... Congratulations, in Susan's "ABUSE" contest... Goodnight **PD

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 6:19:00 AM

    great write Betty.....very touching...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 9:34:00 PM

    Betty, A deep winning poem of abuse. Congratulations, *Luv ~ SKAT~

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 3:41:00 PM

    really like this write. speaks for itself. congrats on 4 place. ran

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 1:20:00 AM

    You write in a short and effective style!! I really enjoyed this one which sadly is true for too many kids today.

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 6:03:00 AM

    Betty ,eloquent and heartbreaking at the same time. I could feel the emotional terror in every line.Anne

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 9:03:00 PM

    A Powerful Poem....thank you for sharing....

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 8:56:00 PM

    wow Betty, this is sad.... it gave me a very bad gut feeling. wow~~~~ Betty, the reality of this stinks of beer. I never had a dad like this. But, I had a friend that went through this. Thanks God, the man went to jail. Now she and her kids moved back to reality. A man is to protect, not to fear. this is by far one of the most saddest realities I've read all year. I'm sending you soup mail. xox~ Linda