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Moon

               
Low hanging moon with softened gleam; As stars peek down, I take my rest. I lie beneath a sheen of cream. Low hanging moon with softened gleam, Your essence wraps around my dream, Then flees beyond your sleepy crest. Low hanging moon with softened gleam; As stars peek down, I take my rest.

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  1. Date: 2/18/2014 10:06:00 PM

    I like this one about the ominous moon..

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 3:16:00 PM

    congrats on your win Andrea

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 1:02:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 5:49:00 AM

    congrats on the win my friend, once again you have done a marvelous job tackling the form.. Take care cory

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 10:29:00 PM

    Andrea, Congratulations!!! :-) very dreamy --what I was looking for when it comes to night themes. always & forever Linda.... Goodnight

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 7:09:00 PM

    sheer beauty

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 7:38:00 AM

    I really enjoyed this your piece on the moon. This poem simply can't escape one's notice.

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 2:33:00 PM

    A sweet gem of a poem Andrea. love phyl

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 9:50:00 PM

    Seldom been as disappointed when a poem finished. So short and sweet.-Red

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 6:40:00 AM

    The beauty comes out in an enchanting form when a Moon starts singing for the other Moon. Great lines my friend. If it is for a contest my good wishes. I have placed a new Poem on 25th. Hope you would find it interesting. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 7:38:00 PM

    Hey Andrea, dont know this form but I do know when I am touched by beauty and this poem certainly gives me a beautiful feeling. Great write, Thanks for stopping by my poems. : )

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 7:30:00 AM

    Straight to my faves! This is simply a stunning piece. I have been so busy lately, but it has been such a treat to read your newest poems this morning. So thank you :)

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 4:53:00 PM

    You certainly make me like a triolet. Fun, how it raps around itself. Sweet dreams. :)

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 10:08:00 AM

    I'm moon struck Andera, or is it your poetry as usual?

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 9:18:00 AM

    I have missed reading your lovely poems.

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 7:01:00 AM

    What sweet words! And isn't it amazing to thnk men have walked on the orb! Nice rhyme too! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 3:22:00 AM

    Beautiful.Love this line very much-- Your essence wraps around my dream---good use of the triolet form here Andrea.

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 2:30:00 AM

    another style I have not heard of,,,, I like it very much though ;}

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 5:07:00 PM

    The ladies and the moon, what I admire most! Here a combination of the two. Double the happiness! Harmonious coexistence, as they are draped in fine expressions!

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 1:02:00 PM

    Great poem Andrea, I really liked the line "as stars peek down, I take my rest.". Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. Oh ya, I entered your contest. Have a great day.

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 9:17:00 AM

    Don't you love the poetry of Sukmawati Komala? Her ideas are fresh and beautiful. This beautiful poem kinda reminds me of her stuff. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 8:25:00 AM

    I honestly enjoyed this piece... Thanks for sharing~A.O

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 7:21:00 AM

    And yes, I paint my face when I hunt to honor my Native American blood. Its tradition at this point. Oh, and thanks for the place in your contest! Gave a fist pump when I saw that!

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 7:19:00 AM

    You keep that up and I will have to crawl back in bed...your imagery ROCKS!...your essence wraps around my dream....I'm not likely to see a line that cool for some time.

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 5:31:00 AM

    Beautiful emerald imagery of adoration. Thanks........., loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 10:22:00 PM

    What a very lovely poem my very dear friend Andrea! Big congrats also for this great trio of yours & the job well done on your wonderful contests. Thank you so much for everything not only for faving my poem but also for this sharing your gems, support, the inspirations & sharing all your lovely favorite poems! More power & blessings to you! So enjoyed reading them all today. I wish you all the best! Have a great weekend! love much & big big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 10:06:00 PM

    Andrea, I want to thank you for all the beautiful comments you leave on my poems. I needed a positive presence tonight..and this poem.. a sigh in the night, something calm and dark, perfect vibes to sleep by, I agree with Carrie.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 7:34:00 PM

    Beautiful........I could fall asleep to such music as this poem! :)

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 6:14:00 PM

    Watch you don't bump your head on that low hanging moon Petal lol, but seriously, I love what you've written here, very dreamy. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 4:22:00 PM

    I'm with Gail on this one, such a nostalgia write being that the moon is the center of the supreme write! You were the one that introduced me to the Triolet and it's poems such as this one that make me want to try it again and again...you make the form shine with your glorious pieces that you write! And this one shines very brightly, it's so beautiful! What a masterful poem Andrea, Great Work!!

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