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Moon

               
Low hanging moon with softened gleam; As stars peek down, I take my rest. I lie beneath a sheen of cream. Low hanging moon with softened gleam, Your essence wraps around my dream, Then flees beyond your sleepy crest. Low hanging moon with softened gleam; As stars peek down, I take my rest.

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  1. Date: 2/18/2014 10:06:00 PM
    I like this one about the ominous moon..

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 3:16:00 PM
    congrats on your win Andrea

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 1:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 5:49:00 AM
    congrats on the win my friend, once again you have done a marvelous job tackling the form.. Take care cory

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 10:29:00 PM
    Andrea, Congratulations!!! :-) very dreamy --what I was looking for when it comes to night themes. always & forever Linda.... Goodnight

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 7:09:00 PM
    sheer beauty

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 7:38:00 AM
    I really enjoyed this your piece on the moon. This poem simply can't escape one's notice.

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 2:33:00 PM
    A sweet gem of a poem Andrea. love phyl

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 9:50:00 PM
    Seldom been as disappointed when a poem finished. So short and sweet.-Red

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 6:40:00 AM
    The beauty comes out in an enchanting form when a Moon starts singing for the other Moon. Great lines my friend. If it is for a contest my good wishes. I have placed a new Poem on 25th. Hope you would find it interesting. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 7:38:00 PM
    Hey Andrea, dont know this form but I do know when I am touched by beauty and this poem certainly gives me a beautiful feeling. Great write, Thanks for stopping by my poems. : )

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 7:30:00 AM
    Straight to my faves! This is simply a stunning piece. I have been so busy lately, but it has been such a treat to read your newest poems this morning. So thank you :)

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 4:53:00 PM
    You certainly make me like a triolet. Fun, how it raps around itself. Sweet dreams. :)

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 10:08:00 AM
    I'm moon struck Andera, or is it your poetry as usual?

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 9:18:00 AM
    I have missed reading your lovely poems.

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 7:01:00 AM
    What sweet words! And isn't it amazing to thnk men have walked on the orb! Nice rhyme too! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 3:22:00 AM
    Beautiful.Love this line very much-- Your essence wraps around my dream---good use of the triolet form here Andrea.

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 2:30:00 AM
    another style I have not heard of,,,, I like it very much though ;}

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 5:07:00 PM
    The ladies and the moon, what I admire most! Here a combination of the two. Double the happiness! Harmonious coexistence, as they are draped in fine expressions!

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 1:02:00 PM
    Great poem Andrea, I really liked the line "as stars peek down, I take my rest.". Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. Oh ya, I entered your contest. Have a great day.

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