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  1. Date: 8/14/2013 11:36:00 PM
    Beautiful! I'm sorry for your loss. I may not know what it's like to lose a child but I do know how it feels to lose loved one.

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 8:35:00 PM
    This is beautiful. So sad and heartfelt. I am sorry for your loss.

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 2:16:00 PM
    I really liked your poem and I will add it to my faves list.

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 2:16:00 PM
    this must be the one here. I looked for a title that would be about someone dying. How sad to lose a child. You expressed exactly the kind of feeling that one would be left with. was it a very recent thing, BB? Again, sorry for the loss.

    Bateson Avatar Betty Bateson
    Date: 4/22/2013 2:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Memories of my Son is the other one. Thanks for reading my poetry. It means a lot.
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 10:21:00 AM
    Dear Betty My sister lost her son and she apparently no longer has a life, which is not something her son would have wanted. I have not been able to help her get past this even for a few minutes. I will show her your poetry and I thank you it means a lot.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 8:51:00 PM
    Betty, everyone can relate to your poem. when missing and longing for a loved one who has passed, always lingers that one question in mind... why o' why o' why??? it is hard letting the way I love your couplet form.... luv* > LINDA <