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The Dynamic of Love

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The Dynamic of Love

I stare at the creamy butter, and remember your buttery words I love you, I love you; "don’t aye hear me I said love you" Saying I love you is like a ritual, It has been repeated Zillion of times from the lips of the ones who fails to remember That a ritual only works when you believe in the dynamic of love the creamy butter look so appealing in comparison to your ritual, your commitment This looks so appealing with all flavors You on the other hand lost your touch

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  1. Date: 4/30/2013 3:12:00 AM
    Amazing work here. I love the entire thing. It drew me in like creamy butter...thanks for this taste. Love the ending line there. Ouch. Hehe. You sure know a thing about love. I like that you mentioned that love can turn into merely a ritual. That's oh so true. Love is action. Far beyond what meets the eye or ear.. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 9:29:00 AM
    Do not let the words become a ritual ...... let them come deep from your heart - A very, very good poem Annie! - Wishing you a lovely weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 4/29/2013 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    To you AnneLiseAndreson for commenting