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She Was

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She Was

	
	She was floating in warm water, watching the heavens.
	She felt her body touched without being touched. 
	She closed her eyes, and submerged.
	She healed her spirit this way.
	She was transformed.
	She knew herself.
	She was whole.
	She was.

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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 4:05:00 PM
    I'm not sure if I told your or not, but I just got back from a month long trip in the UK (It was very cold there, which explains the beanie and jacket... lol).

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 4/21/2013 4:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, I knew you were there. I didn't know it was seriously cold though. Apparently you are always smiling. Good for you! Jack
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 12:45:00 PM
    "She felt her body touched without being touched" << Aww man. Another great water-inspired piece! I liked how the context really gave strength to that last line... says a lot in just two words!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 4/21/2013 2:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Timothy. Looks like you're dressed for cold weather... Jack