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It is About Me Now

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It is About Me Now

clouds are pouring none stop,
bearing their all,
emotions suppressed,
after a very long time,
giving her the chance to do the same..
walking in the energetic train,
of love so deep,
now lost,
tears of joy,
being grateful for all elements,
humbled by adversity
trying force me to grow up at age 26,
i know my fate,
the destiny i create,
painted canvas reflect my soul,
with open wings
waiting to embrace my heart
i am roshan from the blue skies,
excellent and thorough in what i do,
the hand that points a finger at me,
has four fingers pointing
right back at you 
now that I have said my say
let me be to live my life


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  1. Date: 4/19/2013 7:43:00 PM

    Persian, i agree with you. Why can't they just let us be? I like the way you said, for every finger pointed your way, they have four pointing right back at them. a very cool poem. love it! ~*~ SKAT

    heaven Avatar persian heaven Date: 4/20/2013 4:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    SKAT thank you very much. I was 19 when the matchmaking started. genoeg is genoeg :)
  1. Date: 4/19/2013 12:52:00 PM

    I love your poem. I have had people try to hang clouds over me. I was 26 when I graduated from community college back in 2007. That said I have one more year to finish my BA in English and Writing at the age of 33 I'm successful despite the odds that were/are set against me. I understood your poem because I related to most of the themes and motifs. Good job!

    heaven Avatar persian heaven Date: 4/19/2013 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Shukr Ayesha Karim, appreciate you reading and takinf the time to comment.